Heart of a Dungeon

Heart of a Dungeon

by LK the criminal

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

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A dungeon slowly builds up his strength, with only one goal in mind, to take revenge on those who betrayed him while slowly diving into the abyss. Trying to become invincible, the dungeon betrays all standard boundaries of species and evolution.

Mature for possible cursing, I´m leaving the previous description to stand as it is

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Dungeons, there are many forms of them, but what is the best one?

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This is my first story on here, I'll work out the description better later.

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The_Baker
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good job just dont make the dungeon to OP

Looks good my only concern is that the dungeon might be a bit to knowledgeable 

crgmn
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I'm a huge Fan of Dungeon stories and i rly liked the beginning of yours, kinda slow start but i would love to read more :)

 

gonna update the review if there is more of the story :D

Bored monster
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I love dungeon stories so seeing this one is a treat. The mc despite being knowledgeble isn't overpowered, atleast not completely. It uses innovation to create it's monster and had past experiences. Recommend for everyone.

Nivek
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Trust me, you deserve a five star rating just for not giving your dungeon a useless sidekick who takes its cues from microsoft help

This story has a lot of potential and I hope it will be finished