In Another World With My House

by tonyorobsky

Original HIATUS Action Drama Fantasy Romance Harem Magic Slice of Life
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore

A guy and his home were transported to another world. Though he got separated from his former world, he gained a lot in the new one. Warning, mature content once in a while.

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wirzgeek
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Oh please don't let it devolve

So far, interesting story, good idea. However, when I see the new characters being introduced my butt starts clenching in fear of a story that turns from great concept into harem jigglefest 2016. So far so good, just please keep some plot. So far so good though and this review was not meant to be negative, merely cautionary. Will Hopefully delete everything about the review besides the stars and rewrite it after the plot progresses.

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Looks like this will be a fun read. Synopsis is good so far, though I think the story is advancing at a slightly too fast pace.

Style: I like the shifting viewpoints, though having even more viewpoints would be better. The choice seems random.

Story: Good premise, though does have a good amount of plot armor. Skips over story points, and glosses over other important details

Grammar: Simple grammar mistakes, though few in number.

Character: Advances too fast, looks like the MC is already OP on day 1, super OP by day 5.

krunr
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decent start to a new novel. Can't wait until more chapters come out:)