The Demon and the Princess

the only issue i have is the short chapters, but you make up for it in releases

I like it.

No fuss, complicated plot, technicalities, cultivation, zombies, skill points.

Just good old story-telling.

 Really good for a start. Descriptions are very detailed and the scenes flow like magic. Put simply as a prologue this has a high potential and its impossible to not get absorbed into the story. Characters are also well fleshed out and you can sense the individuality in both the main characters. Side characters arent really as well described but overall its excellent. Very few grammar mistakes I havent seen any to take note of yet. Hopefully this standard is kept and im cheering on for the author! Keep it up!

This is undoubtedly one of the best fictions on RRL, much better than many on the first page of the best ranked. 

That said I decided to be brutally honest with this review and point out all the flaws of this novel.

-Style: the style is consistent throughout the novel. The author adopts first person for all his POVs and the writing has a good flow. That said, the many jumps in POV in the chapters, sometimes in the middle of the same scene, are distracting and tend to break an otherwise perfect flow. 

-Story: this fiction is a romance, there are fantasy elements, obviously, but the plot all revolves around the interactions between the characters. This is not a flaw at all, it's a good romance novel, but, despite the struggle of the race differences and the struggles that come with them, it somehow fails to go over the simple "good". There aren't really any problems, it just doesn't manage to tug the hearth of the reader as much as it should. 

-Grammar: Necamijat's grammar is well above the RRL average, there are almost no mistakes, but the ever-present typo (usually no more than a couple per chapter) doesn't allow me to give this section a perfect score. 

-Characters: characters are the real focus of this novel, their interactions and their feelings are what make this novel what it is. That said, while every character is unique and well fleshed out, I'd expect more interactions between them in the form of dialogue. Everyone who has ever read my fic or knows how much I like the Monogatari series might think I'm a bit too much for dialogue but in a novel were the characters themselves are the story, I'd expect much more dialogue between them. 

Everything said, this fiction, while not deserving of a full 5-star score in the single categories, it certainly deserves it as an overall score. 

If you read it, you'll understand too. 

Starting this i didnt know what to expect, nor' was i hopefull.  But this was a gem, sweet like vanilla with a bitter dark chocolate setting.  I, personally loved this story nothing cliche 'though cliche's arn't bad' it was a breath od fresh air.  I loved how you aproched the whole racial bias in such splendor, and i don't much care for 'sex' in novels, but you made it work.  i give it A+ 9.9/10.  i recammend it to any curious lurkers.  Well thats my terrable attempt at a reveiw.

So far one of my favorite stories on RR, its fun, interesting, and fresh. I'm hoping it will be more slice of life, romance with cultural exploration and a hint of adventure.

Demons, carnivorous vegetables and plant imps. 'Nuff said.

Read the first 4 chapters. I am amazed and hooked up. Definitely worth binging this one whole night.

There are some characters you just don't like but most are great, not going to make this long, but, I recommend reading to chapter 61 and stop otherwise it give's you this empty feeling because volume II is hiatus atm. 

ps Volume II is not bad just hiatus

The story feels like a fairy tale that just snuggle you right up but still have that bit of down to earth feeling. The descriptions are very well done and the flow is smooth. It is a little fast paced for my taste but not going to complain when I need my daily sugar intake. 

Keep up the good work!