Evolve or DIE !!!

by Pranay

It was like any other normal night on earth ,the moon was shining and the stars were twinkling brightly in the sky . Everyone was busy doing their tasks , some were working , some were chatting while others were resting.

Suddenly , the sky was lit up by thousands of blindingly bright lights coming towards the earth at an extremely fast speed. Seeing this , people all around the world woke up from their carefree attitude and immediately turned their attention towards the sky . Some were confused, some were scared while others just sat down and prayed silently but everyone knew that it was the sign of an impending disaster .

What are these bright lights and who has caused this ? Is it a human ? Is it god ? Is it the devil ? Or is it something beyond our wildest imagination ?

P.S: This is my first novel so please go easy on this poor soul. ^_^

P.P.S: Here's the link for the (hopefully) better re-write of this novel

www.royalroadl.com/fiction/7216
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pratham
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I think that it is an interesting novel with a good setting and god character power progression and has a lot of potential however the author just needs to work on the grammar a bit and the short chapters.

Goald3n
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Really good so far, well spaced detailed chapters that get to the point and an interesting concept! :)

For now it's a 5 star, once more chapters are released me and many others can make a better assessment!

 

bastian98
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This Story Potentially Could Be Awesome

I'm at chapter 3 as I write this review and this story has amazing potential!

I like how the MC didn't get an overpowering skill in the beginning and I was really surprised when you introduced zombies because most people use more fantasy-like creatures like goblins in the beginning. The only problems I really had were a few grammar mistakes (enough to count on one hand) so far and the length of the chapters. But I think the chapters will get longer as time progresses and the story gets more exposure. Short answer: it's worth a read and better than 53% of the stories here.

michael122
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Good read but less chapters

The idea of the novel is very good though only 2 chapters are out at the time I'm writing this review . I think that this story has a lot of potential and the author should continue with this story

PuffyPanda-
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Unoriginal and cringeworthy

This is literally the same thing as the 3rd best rated story, 'Change: New World,' just a lot worse and badly written. 1: A blue panel telling everyone the worlds going to end. 2: Dungeons, monsters, skills, magic, oh my! 3: Getting an Identification skill right off the bat. Hmm, where have I heard that before? Oh yeah, maybe from that one story thats rated 3rd in the whole freaking site! The writing is cringe worthy and the chapters are way too short. This story is complete CRAP!