Ganda’lfr – The Left Hand of God

by Banjao

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Psychological Romance Tragedy Slice of Life
The eight year old Vectre lay unconscious in his bed. He collapse because of the sudden burst of information entering his brain. The memories of his past life was now unburied and he was being made to remember who he was. An inhabitant from another world. He was from a world where monsters and magic did not exist, where advance technology ran rampant. Huge amount of information are now being process by his brain. Including his ability.
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Vitanima
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It was fine until chapter 12

So it was all fine and dandy, mediocre grammar, run of the mill OP MC story until chapter 12 when all of a sudden a stupid “oh actually im lucifer reincarnated” twist. Then in chapter 15 he goes and tells his new parents that he is just a soul that took over their sons body AND THEY GO ALONG WITH IT AND SAY THEYLL LOVE HIM ANYWAYS. Like seriously?  Im all good with twists and plot devices, but dont make them stupid ones that just dont make any sense.

Unknownsaint171
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Ill have to agree with Vitamina.. The MC is too complicated and his logic for doing things is kinda stupid. 

Don't get me wrong this was pretty good the first couple of chapters. It has proper spacing and not bad grammar. Some sentences don't make sense though and are not well constructed. The Writer also adds a lot of Anime reference! A lot of things feel forceful and have nothing to do with the story. Like the Mc catchphrase "Chtulu" 

The thing I disliked the most was his real identity is Lucifer. What's more after that he tells his Parents.. Wow seriously? Just name him Demon King from Earth or something. At least that would make more sense. And instead of calling it "weapon summoned" why not just say summoning magic?! Lol. The naming sense kinda sucks. I really hope some stuff get rewritten. I really see a lot of potential.

The romance sounds very good. He killed himself in order to be Reincarnated and be with her. Still don't know whether that's good or bad. It would had been more beautiful if they died together instead?

MrKingShit
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Good read and interesting character

Love the ability the character has. So many possibilities. Hope you keep up the good work. For anyone interested in reading this novel if you like power(s)  from manga/light novels that are used/mentioned then this is the read for you. The style isn't totally different from the other novels not to say that it isn't unique in it's own rights. The grammar errors are few if there are any so it makes for a pleasant read. 

wirzgeek
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Interesting character so far

Overall good premise and story, although there hasn't been too much written yet. One recommendation though, the story feels a bit rushed without much in the way of character building or background. Otherwise rather interesting.

wolfshadow
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Really good stuff here

Dude, as a recovering anime addict this really hits home. But I friggin love the references so far. The potential for this story with the MC's ability is humongous. I can see pranks and hilarious situations already. Keep it up man, and I love how you incorporated some more depth into the story with the recent chapter. Waiting for your next chapter.

royaldarknes
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for the chapter 12 and the comment from Vitanima

the part about his new parents accept him and go along with it is quite not good because it make they look stupids ,but at least in the next 2 chapter (after the fight) the author did fix it a little bit ,for the rest is still good,he just need someone to do proofread