You want to fight me?
I will fight!
You want me to go to this dangerous place?
I will go!
You want to hurt the people close to me?
I will kill you!
You will be a hassle in the future?
I won't let you live another day!
This is my story!
So watch as I use the memories and power from my world in this new strange world where power and money are everything.
Watch how I become the Dragon Sword God!
[18+ Warning contains Gory scenes, Strong language and Sexual scenes]
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Here is my review for chapter 30 and below.
The main is a fun and enjoyable to follow
The comedy is pretty dang good
The main is nonchalant and doesn't freak out like an idiot
The story is a bit fast paced and the arks could be longer
The Main could have a bit more of a challenge (at the moment I agree with Ramen that it feels a bit to easy for the main. A way for the main to have more of a challenge is to put him into a bit of a pickle, like throw him into another land or something. But Be sure to have the trouble happen gradually. If you decide to make it happen all at once you will probably lose readers if you don't write it out well enough( and I mean really well). Another way is to give him something like an impossible sounding objective or ambition)
The story could be fleshed out a bit more (add stuff like Character details and setting details ( I can tell that the sect the main is in has lots of buildings but I can't tell what they are made out of or how big the buildings are in general)
Anyway a final verdict; fun and enjoyable to read.
Well, it's a good story and entertaining, but there's something missing.
there's no trouble, the MC path is very smooth just like a baby skin that it feels like plot exist solely to make life easier for MC.
Looking forward to where you'll take this story.
The grammer is great, which I find to be very important.
So far(chapter 11) it's not extremely unique. All the makings of classic xianxia are coming together. The MC'S new body is, while not unheard of, is something I haven't seen in a xianxia before.
The genre-savyness is entertaining. It could either turn this into a parody or just be an amusing quirck of the MC.
The MC is rather nonchalant about everything, which has been addressed in the story. I personally like that kind of character, though.
As for OP-ness, while he's stronger than those around or slightly above him in cultivation, I don't think he'll absolutely dominate his enemies. He does seem to follow a powerful cultivation technique, and has a spirit adviser, like all xianxia protagonists, so he'll probably have an advantage early on, but that will be less and less apparent as time goes on. Assuming the author wants this to go the classic route.
Xianxia all the way! Really liked this until now, pretty much on par with normal "official" xianxia novel.