Lament of the Fallen

by Vihyungrang

Original COMPLETED Action Drama Fantasy Romance Female Lead Magic Non-Human lead Strong Lead
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What happens when the great war is over and the 'good' side has won? What happens to the last surviving members of the fallen 'evil' side of the conflict? This is the tale of one of those survivors. Will she try to seek revenge? Will she try to hide her origin and ancestry and live in peace? Or will the universe have something else in mind?

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Thereadman
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Not what's advertised, but really good.

The synopsis is kind of misleading. It's a really good story, and I really loved following the MC on her path, but the actual struggle of the defeated demons and fallen angels really doesn't play any part in this story. We get to meet some of them at the very end at least, but for the most part it's about the MC growing up in Space Switzerland.

I have to repeat that the story is very good though and that I had a lot of fun reading it!

motoshead89
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A well paced story with great plot arcs and a focused over-arching plot. Great blend of mythologies and interesting abilities that are more than your standard sword-and-sorcery standards.

ILeaveAReviewWhenIDropIt
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  1. I like the novel actually. But liking it only brings me this far. In chapter 169 the story no longer appeal to me, the story is predictable. Plot armor and stuff happens but not this obvious.
  2. The powers, skills, racial abilities, and blessings are all over the place. Some of these powers are described with lots of potential but remain stagnant because of inflation of quantity powers. Its okey but left me stifled.
  3. She is destined to do great things. So Gods give her aid so they can request something of her. But it is because of their aid that she is great. I can't see her going anything great without the blessings, (you can't charge a power bank using the same power bank)
Juneau
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Mobile phone so no fancy formatting. Contains comments regarding the plot so avoid in advance.

 

This is a great story that's covers the journey of our protagonist.

Let down only by a rushed and disappointing ending.

 

Overall the story was great, the progression felt lucky, natural, skillful and clever plotted.

The time spent away sometimes felt lacking impact but other times it had a huge impact.

But the ending left me very disappointed. All those worlds, things to learn, places to visit, relationships to explore but somehow they had "done it all" in such a short time frame felt hollow and completely unrealistic considering the time previously spent doing other things.

 

The epilogue however left me thinking of all the short stories that could follow.

 

I'm still giving it a 5 star because I enjoyed it for the journey, and for the ending, Ill just pretended that the time before she moved on added another 0... or her companions went with her. But alas, not my story, not my ending.

 

Desveres a read.

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Alright my first review on RR, I'm not great at writing reviews so I'll go over a few points that bothered me (till chapter 100)

Ok so first of all the whole explain no show thing. It is very very obvious in this novel like when MC got captured by the assassins. You are told she suffered but hell even the MC herself doesn't seem to have too many feelings about that, we are told she hates them and she suffered but you don't feel it. Seriously, except crying one time and reminding us occasionally she hates them she doesn't seem to have any trauma or serious damage from that time. I don't care how mature she is supposed to be for her age, forget a child even an adult that goes through such hell will either break or be at least heavily traumatized.

Dee herself is a very dull MC she's smart but except for coming across snarky and condecending sometimes theres no real personality. There are no real meaningful connections with people (even that elf captain which is supposed to be like a sister to her feels to me like a familiar stranger), no real motivation to do anything or any attachments. Other characters are also very bland, not much personality either and like another reviewer said their conversations with each other seem to happen only for the purpose of explaining to the reader what is going on.

Next are the time skips. Time skips are great, they help avoid what could be tedious parts of a novel. Here they happen all the time. Dee starts learning or training and skip rince and repeat a dozen times which is done in a way that takes the feeling of achievement, she is learning a new move, next chapter she mastered it.

And finally the OPness. I like strong MC's but she is LITERALLY overpowered in every way possible: as a psion (a conviniently op power) she is smart, learns fast, has mental abilities of all sorts, stealthy. She is made of a bunch of strong races giving her a couple of forms to make her even stronger. Given some body reinforcements from the assassins. Given blessings from 4 top gods with a near limitless supply of holy power (which she for some reason uses very little in battle compared to her other abilities) one of which is a deus ex machina type that activates near death, ensuring she can't really die. There's more but you get the drift... It seems everything comes too easy for her, Not just abilities, masters too they just come to teach her one after another.

Long rant short, I enjoyed the novel in the beginning until gradually I couldn't take it anymore.