Searful - Rise of The Alaba [Dropped]

by Zono

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

 

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ultragunner
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I know it's still new and all, but the story description really burns my eyes. Please edit or change it completely, reducing names and adding better descriptions maybe?

Drogan
Overall

unique story

good context

effective battle scenes

neat and tidy with its loose ends

only real negative is minor spelling mistakes

 

overall good story and hoping for more . . .

darksideskna
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it's a unique story, the chapters are short and most of the daily life is time skipped, but it's a story worth reading.

Roknar
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Well written just not my cup of tea

Well written but just not my type of story. I have def read much worse, but the MC just a wee bit too narcisstic for my tastes. The author def has a good grasp on how to tell a story.

RaelTheForgotten
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I read this a while back as a guest well I remembered about it and have to hope the hiatus ends soon.. this book is better than the majority I've found in the months after I caught up

dosithee
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gramar and word choice are spot on.  

 action is well depicted and pretty exciting.

story is better than most.

somehow the characters seem a bit flat and the story lacks tension so far.  

defenatly in the Top 2%

a good read.

not a litrpg as of yet

Wildmonkey
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The story is right up my alley. Well written though there is some grammar errors here and there through out the story that needs to be fixed. Story wise the author leaves enough mystery to keep u wondering what's going to happen in the future while also balancing the present. Character somewhat op but not to the point where the story gets boring. Overall 4.5.only needs to Fix the grammar.