A Hero's Common Sense

by Savoyarde

I am not a hero of this story. Even though I was reborn as a beautiful maiden, I wasn't the one to slay the demon lord. However, instead of an eternal vacation in a fantasy land, I had to babysit an horribly overpowered dunce who calls me a childhood friend, while dodging this bastard's flags.
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Augustus
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A different view on a classic setting

A nice start to the story, I like the Idea of the non-typical perspective, it reminds me of some of the side chapters from Kumo Chan's story. I also like how both of the characters are totally dense, but it plays to the trope and the backstory of the MC, Tsunderes are the best!

Yahweh
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Light Novel Cliches with a Twist

...And a different viewpoint. This is nice, fluffy story that plays on the tropes of reincarnation/transmigration into a fantasy world with magic, except from the pov of what would likely be a 'harem member', with a dumb hero by her side. Except, because the hero and heroine grew up together, the hero has been converted by the heroine's influence.

Noraneko
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I love this story, hope it wont become yuri 

Nuux
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Love the Character Alan the most :3

I can really get into this story, Although I am not good at Grammar or such, I am usually picky with my stories I like...... And this one is really good.