Living it for the Plot

I'm really liking this story. The MC seems to be a genuinely good dude, just trying his best in an insane world that relies on porno/sex video game logic.

The concept of this world threw me for a loop, but the author has been great about keeping it more than PG-13 and less than R.

As long as your disbelief has been suspended, this story is very enjoyable, and I'm looking forward to finishing it.

Good English, no obvious grammatical mistakes. Basic idea- what if someone got sent to a world based on 1980s porn movies? Our MC has a System that seemingly wants him to become the most amazing lover in the world,  but he doesn't want that. 

It's a little weird in that he has figured out the basic idea, but doesn't think the implications through- at one point, he thinks he's organizing a union, everyone else thinks he's organizing an orgy. Not really to unbelievable levels yet, but could easily get there.

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I find this to be an incredibly enjoyable read, especially in regards to the gimmick which makes this story unique from others. The hijinks that ensue due to the actions of our MC are always funny to see, alongside the abuse of the system that seems highly flawed!

Overall, I can't find any issues in this story and I can't wait to read the rest.

The world of this story is terrifying. Not to spoil too hard, but the author takes the idea of a world running on sex-logic to its natural conclusion. How would such a world similiar to our earth function in day to day people's lives?

It's comedic, it's tragic, it's awesome.

In terms of Grammar, haven't noticed a single mistake. The Style of writing is the kind where it flows naturally and you don't even really notice it. 

The story and character are where it really shines though. Our main character is thrust into a world they barely understnad and must come face to face with the prospects of trying to live without submitted to a literally all-encompassing culture that is abbohrent to him. 
Oh there is a system too. It's done well and integrated into the story nicely rather than as some tacked on thing. 

Can't wait to see where things go.

I thought this story would be some shallow romp that I could pass a small while with-- surely the miscommuncation jokes can only be dragged on for so long-- but I was very wrong.

Life in the world of Living it for the Plot is much like a soap opera. And while the reasons are unknown to us so far, that's intentional, by someone or something. Horrifically, as suggested in the prologue, there's something darker, grimmer, going on that has led to such a distinctly bonkers alternate reality.

While I don't care much for the type of humour itself, a genuinely good (if slightly plagued with anger issues) main character with interesting inner monologues is carrying it for me.

Grammar and spelling is perfect, prose flows well. No complaints here!

  You often hear how a story is grabbing what is an overused trope and taking it to new and interesting heights, but few stories I have read exemplify it as well as this one. 

 When I heard what it was about I was weary, mostly because I wanted to avoid smut, since It's simply not my cup of tea, and to make matters worse, smut plus LitRPG often adds up to swallow characters and not to my taste interactions. Worst, lately, I associate LitRPG with repetitive and unoriginal plots and developments that are more mathematical than tangible, but the good reviews and the promise that, despite its premise, this novel wouldn't touch on porn made me give it a try and I definitely don't regret it. 

 Rather than fall into the tired tropes that I feared, it makes fun of them with its amazingly charming MC fighting to avoid such troubles with troubles following him at his every step. 

Style: Easy to follow, quickly flowing, and no annoying jumps. The story comes to the reader clearly as the MC himself meets the world, and whatever exposition was used came into play naturally enough that I barely noticed by the time I was up to speed. 

Story: The best part of the novel; a good idea done well. The plot is exactly as the synopsis promised, but somehow it manages to feel interesting beyond that. It is funny, but also compelling, and I imagine it is because the author took the time to consider what it meant for things to be the way they are. There is a bit of a mystery vibe going on, with an understanding of the reason things came to be as they are getting into focus as the story moves forwards. By the end of volume 1, the main culprit seems to be showing its shadow, and I am all the more curious about the why and how. 

Grammar: Almost spotless. If there were grammar mistakes, I didn't see them, so nothing distracting. 

Characters: We could say "Character" because the Main Character eats up the story. Thankfully, he is charming enough that I am not complaining. He is his own person, and has clear reasons for being the way he is. Too much of his past is still missing to truly understand him fully, but a clear enough picture of his motivation has been drawn and I am more than satisfied as a reader.  Meanwhile, the side characters are, by the very nature of this plot, a bit monodimensional at times, but I think the author is very clever in using his empathic main character to humanize what at a first glance are porno protagonists and side characters with sex addiction as their main trait. A few interesting people have been introduced by now, but there hasn't been enough time to flesh them out. 

 All around, I hope more people jump into it and look forward to what's to come in the new books. To me in particular, the story has a good balance of making you want to know more and giving satisfying and entertaining plots in each chapter.