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Man this thing hasn't been updated in more than 3 years and its still so good. I wish there were more like this.
I read this back when it had just been finished and loved it, I just reread it and it's still amazing, just wish you had decided on continuing it.
Kiro is a likable character that rocks. I especially love the DrakexScales arc. However, you might want to make the story a little more realistic. I mean, one attack killing 200 people. Also, your characters need to be developed better
Pretty good story, but where the update at doe?
Story is well written but the mc is so damn OP! It's fun to read, but I'm hoping he soon faces an opponent that actually challenges him.
I simply loved the story, at some parts it was a bit corny like the time lords guild but mostly it was an amazing read. Please don't leave it hanging and complete the story and please check the grammar and spellings along side because at some places they aren't correct.
This story is a masterpiece. It avoids the error most fanfic writers make by making their characters way too overpowered all of a sudden, without any proper or reasonable explanation. While Yukiro is indeed OP, this story catalogs his rise from a complete novice to someone who is insanely strong by immersing himself in the game. The plots are all well thought out and are excellently portrayed. I love reading this story and imagining what Kiro will do next. There is plenty of foreshadowing all over the place and the transitions between chapters and scenes make the story easy to follow. However, if I have to have one complaint, it would be about the number of spelling errors in this fic. While considerably less than most of the other fics I've read, there are still a few typos here and there every chapter. While it does not impact the overall story, it is nonetheless irritating. Despite this, the story is engaging and fun. It draws readers in and captivates them. I would encourage everyone to read this masterpiece.
not instant OP mc.. Love it.. can't wait for update.. but sadly already few month but still no update T.T
Dear Author if you read this why did you do this.. T.T
love every second of this FF, MC is perfect and interesting way of introducing the MC to the VR have not seen it before and loved it please continue this!
Why isn't the releases coming out anymore? I've been dying for more. It's not dropped is it?