The Underrun (Portal Fantasy)

The Underrun (Portal Fantasy)

by VictoriaKellyWrites

In the isolated mining community of Grevick, winter has brought hard times and tightened belts. For 17-year-old orphan Tip, the oppressive rules of the settlement have always offered plenty of chances to practice her thieving skills. But now, her ability to find food for her fellow orphans literally signifies life or death. 

When a looting mission gone wrong leads her to an underground waterway system, Tip is determined to explore it with her closest friends. But their plan of making supply runs to feed the orphans doesn't turn out quite the way they expected.

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A fun start and an interesting character. Obviously not much to go on yet, but there's already a good sense of humor and a sense of adventure. Just came from reading Turn me Back! which finished 2 years ago and was hoping the author has written more- lo and behold, a new story started 2 days ago! Very much looking forward to reading the rest of this one!