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For those who do not understand the reference,  "wish fulfillment" is before anything a term created by Sigmund Freud in the 1900's.


In psychology it is a state of satisfying unconscious needs and desires by the use of fantasy and delusion.


In literature it is the very base of fictional work, but also the name of a style of writing where the author sacrifices the key elements of good storytelling in order to fulfill his own psychopathic, neurotic or perverse needs and desires, usually through the use of the characters in weird and forced situations.


What I meant by the title of this story is that it is a trashy, badly written, shitty story about me getting some wish fulfillment by the use of some characters and a fictional world of my creation.


Not the good kind of fulfillment, since my wishes are of the bad kind and I intend to fulfill those, not yours. Also, being a total amateur and not writing a proper plot before starting are two big indicators that this story is going to go bad.


I guess Royal Road call this kind of stories the  "Mary Sue"  kind.


So, unless you are a very ugly piece of trash (at least as much as I am) don’t bother reading it.


Now, if you ARE messed up on the level of a clinically depressive, lightly suicidal, lolicon/shotacon aligned morbidly obese hikikomori vermin who sold his virginity to a prostitute and is currently living at the costs of his widowed mother after expending all the money he got from his father’s inheritance, all the while masturbating furiously to beast/furry dickgirl hentai, then be welcomed. Please feel free to get a serving at my antidepressants and also at the canned tuna I have stored in the fridge. There may be some cheese somewhere, and I am pretty sure I bought some juice the other day, but I have no idea where it is.


Anyway.


You may dislike what I write because of all the amauteur(ish) writing, or you may not. Who knows. Give it a try and write a comment. It gets lonely writing to no one.


Also, feel free to grant me inspiration not only by making comments about the world and/or characters, but specially by suggesting a music for me to listen while I write the next chapter.


Be warned : I do get influenced easily by the background music I listen while writing.


If you exist, of course. I'm seriously doubting anyone has read anything after the "lolicon hikikomori" thing.


Also, I have a tiny dick.


Just so you can feel better about yourself a little more.


Or maybe I have just degraded psychologically a little more and now I am into shame-play. I wonder if the psychiatrist would increase my meds a bit if I told her about it.


Hope I never get to penispanick, though! Self-mutilation, especially of the castration type, would be baaaad. After all, I do like my prostitutes. And having sex with them when I can afford it.


Oh, yeah, the story. I will just write the first chapter in a few moments.


Until later, b(i)each.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue: The Goddess in The Bright Room ago
Chapter 1 : Birth and Early Life ago
Chapter 2 : First Birthday (Repost) ago
Extra Chapter 1 : Work Hard And You Won't Think Weird Things ago
Intermission: A Special Day in Winter ago
Chapter 3 (part 1) : A Year Watching on The Sides ago
Chapter 3 (Part 2) : A Year Watching On The Sides ago
Extra Chapter 2 : Sausage Making ago
Extra Chapter 3: A Frightening Son ago
Chapter 4: Increased Difficulty Level (part 1) ago
Chapter 4: Increased Dificulty Level (Part 2) ago
Extra Chapter 4: Neighbor Complains ago
Extra Chapter 5: My Grandson ago
Extra Chapter 6: Family Meeting ago
Extra Chapter 7: Grandma Teaches. ago
Chapter 5 : A Winter to Remember (Part 1) ago
Chapter 5 : A Winter to Remember (Part 2) ago
Extra Chapter 8 : Hot Bath Day (2) ago
Extra Chapter 9: Hags Poison ago
Chapter 6: Confession (Part 1) ago
Chapter 6: Confession (part 2) ago
Extra Chapter 10: Fatherly Worries ago
Extra Chapter 11: Family Meeting (2) ago
Chapter 7: Ten Thousand Years of History. ago
Extra Chapter 12: Brown Tea ago
Extra Chapter 13: Vigilant ago
Extra Chapter 14: My Sin ago
Chapter 8: A Long History Lesson ago
Extra Chapter 15: Just a Farmer ago
Chapter 9: Sister is Leaving ago
Extra Chapter 16: Working on the Fields ago
Extra Chapter 17: Things of Old ago
Extra Chapter 18: Big Sis is No Good! ago
Chapter 10: Go On and Keep Going ago
Extra Chapter 19 – The Grandson’s Cute Worries ago
Extra Chapter 20 – Little Brother is troubled. ago
Extra Chapter 21 – Party ago
Chapter 11: Tom the Merchant and Other Little Things ago
Chapter 12: Jacen Does Something Stupid ago
Extra Chapter 22 – Confession. ago
Extra Chapter 23 – Mind ago
End of Volume 1 ago
Chapter 1: Spirits and Friends ago
Extra Chapter 24: Awareness ago
Extra Chapter 25: Surpassed ago
Chapter 2: Killing and Building. ago
Extra Chapter 26: Always ago
Extra Chapter 27: Old Witch ago
Extra Chapter 28: On the Path ago
Extra Chapter 29: Sincerely! ago
Chapter 3: Time Keeps Flowing ago
Extra Chapter 30: Darkness ago
Extra Chapter 31: Remorse ago
Chapter 4: Older Sister is Returning! ago
Extra Chapter 32: Fairness ago
Chapter 5: Things that happen ago
Extra Chapter 33: Preparations For Returning ago
Extra Chapter 34: A Strong Daughter as Well ago
Extra Chapter 35: Younger Brother and Older Sister ago
Extra Chapter 36: Ann and Anna ago
Extra Chapter 37: Alvin ago
Extra Chapter 38: Purification ago
Chapter 6: Back Home, Things to Do ago
Extra Chapter 39: Back Home ago
Extra Chapter 40: Thinking ago
Extra Chapter 41: Power ago
Extra Chapter 42: Tools ago
Extra Chapter 43: At Least ago
Extra Chapter 44: Forest Spirit Tales (1) ago
Extra Chapter 45: Forest Spirit Tales (2) ago
Extra Chapter 46: Forest Spirit Tales (3) ago
Extra Chapter 47: Forest Spirit Tales (4) ago
Extra Chapter 47: Forest Spirit Tales (5) ago
Extra Chapter 48: Forest Spirit Tales (6) ago
Extra Chapter 49: Forest Spirit Tales (7) ago
Chapter 7: Change Unrest ago
Chapter 8: One last year ago
Extra Chapter 50 - Alvin is Leaving. ago
Extra Chapter 51 - Traveling Guide ago
Extra Chapter 52 - Maps ago
Intermission Chapter - Two Sides of the Same Coin ago
-So...- ago
Chapter 1 - Traveling Around ago
Chapter 2 - Suddenly, everything changes. ago
Extra Chapter 51 - Lover ago
Stuff ago
Last words ago

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spammalot
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I can't tell whether this is a mocking of the reincarnation trope but from what I read I guess it is. It has from just the prologue a good basis for mocking the trope. Due to the title I can only hope that during later chapters you do more references to Freudian theories such as:  neuroticism, Oedipus-complex, comments on the Id, ego and super ego, the stages of development of children and adults metally and sexually, the six stages of grief and mainly a focus on the mental health of encountered characters. 

Anyway ideas over, but be sure to continue, I like a lot of the features of the main character but don't make him obscenely powerful, have him build up to it.

Oh and add some categories.

This was my first review I hope it helps

wraith26
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what did i just read?

well .. what can i say.. since its your wish fulfillment . i cant really do anything.. everyone have their own ideals and wish... but this wish of yours.. the words that cameto  mind is " debauchery " .. 

 

update..

i quit.. its so boring.. its really moshoku tensei.. with extremely long childhood period..