*Clank* *Clank* *Clank*

'Dammit, how long has it been now, a year, a century, 20 minutes. Then again I suppose the whole point of removing time perception is to make it feel eternal.'

"Hey why are you slacking off! Your sentence shall be doubled if you don't get back to work immediately!"

*Clank* *Clank* *Clank*

*****

*Clank* *Clank* *Clank*

'Would you look at that, my skin finally began to rot, guess they chose to really screw me over, I wonder what awaits when only my spirit remains...'

*Bzt* *Bzt* *Bzt*

'Torture through light electrocution, how original, guess the added burn is something. That's weird, though, I thought the soul was unable to be tortured until the outer shell decayed...'

*Bzzt* *Bzzzt* *Bzzzzt*

'Wait something isn't right, this doesn't feel like them.'

'Wait, No, STOP!'

"HEL-!!!"

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