Piret king's dungeon(dungeon core)

Piret king's dungeon(dungeon core)

by Bedy_boop

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The mc was killed on accident by a falling peano and was reancarnated as a dungeon core in the middle of the ocean and he will create his dungeons themed after his favorite Manga. (Self indulgence story my gramer is going to be atrocious) 

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AJellyfish
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Im sorry but this doesnt make sense

Reviewed at: Um... let's begin

The spelling is atrocious and I can barely understand what the author is trying to say, it feels like it was written by a five year old and while I know that may sound harsh just read the first chapter. 

The chapter that im talking about is barely five sentances and the blue box takes up most of the chapter, all in all while it may seem harsh...I don't think that this should be on this site without some seroius revision. Sorry.