The Wonderous Wiley
by fsarbolaez
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- Traumatising content
Tom Wiley used to be part of a psychic family act. Nationwide fame was within their grasp until his powers were taken away by an illness. It has been years since then, and he lives his life just like everyone else without any mental powers. One night however, an animal attack on his way back home will unlock something long thought to be lost...but at what cost?
*A one-shot short story
(Content Warning: Contains moments of gore and traumatic experiences)
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Quick! Great! To the point!
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I really like this little tale and the plot is great. The backstory is covered so you have an idea of our MC and his situation. I would of course like to read more and get other outlandish pieces of the Wonderous Wiley! But it is a short story and that is the name of the game. The author did a great job with the execution of it. I have to admit the cover is what drew me to this at first. It is one of a kind on here.
The cover is a smash up of: MASK (Rocky Dennis) and SCANNERS in my mind!
Impressed and definately one of my favorite short stories on here so far.
Scary mind
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Overall I think this story has a huge potential but it's just a bit too short. It sometimes feels rushed and there's too much telling instead of showing. The idea is brilliant, it just needs a more precise execution. I enjoy stories about the horrors of human mind and the ending was really surprising