Momo The Ripper [Isekai/LitRPG]

All Momo ever wanted to do was pet her cat, binge Netflix shows, and finish her art degree; now she's the newest initiate in a necromage cult, but at least her boss is a hot dom necro-mommmy. Plus, she gets cool undead pets.

I'm pretty obsessed with this novel. Villa1ny has done a wonderful job incorporating real worldbuilding with fun comedy and multi-dimensional characters. Though the MC's will and social skills may be weak, their characterization as the POV narrator is strong, giving the story a smooth, pageturning readability that brings you into the world through Momo's eyes.

I really enjoy the story telling style that Villa1ny uses. Momo's lens is strong but (mostly) self aware, and her character is incorporated meaningfully into the progression of the story, driving (though not completely controlling) the plot as we explore Alois and Morgana's Dawn with our timid heroine.

The grammar is also quite good having little to no flaws. This fiction does a great job of Bone Dancing the line of comedy and seriousness, though at least until as far as I've read it stays far closer to the comedy side. That said, it's a wonderful time reading regardless of which genre camp you'd intially dump yourself in. 

Give this one a shot.

Momo is a good girl, with one or more complexes. However, we follow her along her journey to less complexes and more badassery.

The story might not be for everyone (sometimes a bit light on the detailing side and Momo is propably not everyones cup of bug juice). However! This story is snarky, full of wit, has interesting side characters and internal monologue of Momo that is a skeletal riot.

Style: Somehow in my opinion resembles Terry Prachet, fun and easy to read. NIce flow of words, goes down like undead essence.

Story: Unique, fascinating world and hints of more to come, a fun insight into a world that is locked in battle between the "light" und the... Misunderstood... Dark. There are hints about a bigger conflict to come, but this seems quite far away right now.

Grammar: As a non-native, there was nothing that was glaringly wrong, which is always a good sign.

Charakter: Momo definitely is the main reason this story works as well as it is. She is weird, has a whole lot of complexes and would be delighted to keep it that way if it weren´t for those pesky intelligence points. She really is a loveable dork.

Overall: Do read this! It is fun!

Just a basic review for now as I'm not that far in yet.

But I really love this story.

The MC is just so lovable, falling into tears whenever someone raises their voice, then going mad with power once she can order someone around finally. We need more necromancers making necro-kitties to cuddle with too. 

The prose is rich and whimsical, and every village is full of dancing gnomes and bones. I laughed multiple times each chapter, so I can only hope this fic will keep giving. Will update to advanced later.

(just kinda a thought dump, takeaways would be good book, give it a try)very solid, alot of funny carecters and defently fufills its strengths as a comedy. the pacing can be a little odd somtimes but the unique system is a boon. I love the carecters and the world building is strong. one recomendation that could help fix the pacing and highlight the good worldbuilding is to include minor notes about traveling, for example insted of saying she was here and then she was here you could do a transtion sentence about the process. keep up the good work and highly recomend reading

From the first chapter, I was hooked on the story. The writing is snappy, the protagonist is immediately funny and likeable, and there's much I want to know about the world. 

And the story just improves as you move through the chapters; with strange wizards, bony bears, and the dreaded dragon Capalsm. I thoroughly recommend this anyone lookin for a fun read.

Style - The style is excellent and the writing makes it easy to read. I breezed through the first part of the story, and more than once I found myself smiling from reading some of the quips. The author has really captured the essence of the protagnist and I look forward to seeing how Momo evolves.

Grammar - The grammar is solid, but there are few problems sprinkled through the story, mainly to do with dialogue. But it's nothing that a second pass can't fix, and in no detracts from the reading experience. It's very solid for a work that hasn't been edited yet.

Story - So far, the story has been great. While it's still near the beginning, the groundwork for an overarching story has been experlty laid. Several factions have been introduced, along with some world building to explain the conflict in the story. If the author continues on the path, the story will be top-notch

Character - The character Momo is definitely the highlight of the book. She's instantly likeable, has great quotes, and you really feel for her plight. From a pair of yokels demanding she take a bath, to a disobedient bear, she's had to face some difficult challenges—and she overcomes them all with unique talents. I can't wait to see what she does next.

Overall, it's a very solid story, which I think will only get better from here. I'll update my review as more chapters are published.

Okay so, some of the conflict are very "cringy". It feels a bit too lighthearted and some villains tends more to be comical, but I got used to it and if ya don't mind it, this is the perfect story for ya.

The character development is nice and I really love seeing the MC get out of her introvert shell. 

A lot of characters are way more catchy than the usual side characters we get for 3 chapters and boom spiritus disparitus. And it's kinda impressive that I got attached to some of them even without having the usual " this is the side character's POV chapter".

The world building is nicely paced, but I'm kind of surprised of how fast things become "bigger and meaner". Like a jump of responsibilities etc...(trying to not spoil xD) Why do I mention that? I'm kind of scared that the content becomes repetitive fast or devolve into the "grind, I'M POWAAAHHH, oh no villain #2726267, I'M VICTORIOUS, grind..." Cycle you know. BUT I do see something that the author is preparing that should atleast avoid the story to turn like what I said before. Atleast before the 300th chapters? XD 

In general, I'm lovin it. I'm sure you'll love it too!

Bone appétit ! 

Very rare that an user ad lesds to an actually good story but this gem here was absolutley worth clicking on and reading it. The start is pretty slow and hard to ge through but once the first few carisma point slam in it gets easier and easier to just get lost in the story. 

Also, i am european and the mention of 80k student öoans made me go down a rabbot hole so curse you for that you coniving conartist caster. 

The humor is fine, but I found the story quite repetitive after a time. Momo always seems to trust someone she shouldn't, which always leads to her being a punching bag for some time, before she is somehow rescued. In most cases the offending party receives a light slap to the wrist and everything is fine.

It becomes kinda boring how passive Momo is.