All the Dust that Falls: A Roomba Isekai Adventure

I like the story so far, it's absolutely hilarious reading this from both perspectives. It shows promise so far, and the grammar, and characters are great. I've love to see one more development in the magic or the history of the world but I'm sure that will come as the story progresses

This one is just a joy to read. It is funny, engaging and and well-written. It will probably not become an epic fantasy series, considering the main character, but I simply love the way the author plays with the misconceptions and different perspectives. It isn't a five-course meal of fantasy excellence, but it is definitely a nice satisfying snack. Read it when you don't want to invest a lot of brainpower, but still want to be thoroughly entertained.

Well  written, good character development with fun twist and turns.  The humor is well done but also a serious side.  Will be intersting to see how Spot aka Void develops, will he be true to path of fighting the evil dirt in this world or create his own kingdom?  Maybe both?

Seriously funny, omg funny!  Yes the you tube with the roomba that cussed every time it hit a wall or obstacle made me laugh too.  This is even better than that!  This author is hilarious, I'm just up to chapter 30 and have had several (ok dozens) rotflmao moments.  Story progression has been great, world building superb, characters good, but spot, i love spot so much!

Style/poise and grammar are impeccable. Not a spec of dirt in sight in these words - spot made sure to clean them up real good.

Jokes aside this is a roomba isekai. It heavily uses misconceptions for humor and spends a delightful amount of time detailing the struggles of a little bot just trying to clean things. You can tell the author owns a roomba - I don't think you need one to enjoy the humor but it definitely added to the experience for me.

The Story is a slice of life with a minor progression aspect. Theres a few alternative POV's that are mostly used for comedy but are well done. Personally I'm looking forward to any future mutations/growth but I'm also worried too many might break it from its currently well laid roomba roots. I'm stuck between hoping it never changes and knowing if it stays cleaning indefinitely the premise might grow stale.

The Character score is based soly on the roomba's internal monologue and viewpoint. I love it - I can imagine its what my own Roomba is thinking - and hope to see how it grows in intelligence and personality in the future.

Overall this is better than I was expecting - and I was expecting alot based on the name. I definitely recommend it for anyone who wants to read about an isekaied roomba

What more do you need to know? This story is perfection incarnate. All hail the power of Spot the Roomba's name All hail the power of Spot the Roomba's name All hail the power of Spot the Roomba's name All hail the power of Spot the Roomba's name All hail the power of Spot the Roomba's name

This is actually an amazing first chapter, I chuckled the whole way through and thoroughly enjoyed it! I'm not sure how the author came up with the concept, but bravo.  It was creative, funny, and actually developed the character quite well.  I look forward to seeing where we go. Now on to the next chapter!

The story gets a bit slow at times but otherwise is hilarious and enjoyable. I was cracking up from chapter one and laughing almost as hard when caught up. If he has Void level up soon it should help keep things paced appropriately in my opinion. The powers he obtains are fitting and hilarious and I can't look at my own roomba the same again.

Void (or Spot) is hilarious and adorable to the reader, the the natives reaction of horror to him never gets old. He keeps finding new ways to accidentally traumatize the people he meets.

Having the two perspectives of Void and Beatrice helps remind us how horrifying his abilities are even though void himself doesn't really seem to see himself as dangerous and just wants to clean! 

Look forward to seeing an innocent roomba trying to win human friends while making mortals and demons alike fear for their very souls.
What is a demon but a large rat that needs to be cleaned. Mess makers beware as no filth remains after Void has passed by. The world shall be plunged into chaos not by the gods or men, but by a single sentient vacuum whose only desire is to clean and find a human willing to help him descend those damn stairs.

Looking forward to see where this goes! 

With dust bunnies, dirt, caked in grime and other such powerful enemies. Whilst trying to face such mighty foes, nuisances and boons appear constantly. Where is Spot the roomba, why does this carpet seems so relaxing? Why do these mess makers have so many forms and keep making things hard and hurting the little human? A rat gains sentience amid the void whilst surrounded on all sides by demons, a coming age story of a girl who so happens to be a devotee (religious or cultural equivalent to a priest or cleric some such), and the roomba who wishes to do aid his humans and one day return home after his training. Jokes aside this is all technically in this story. Give it a shot, slow burn but it's starting to come to a boil and I look forward to what's cookin. 

P.s. multiple pov, mostly between two characters with occasional side character views. It's a slow story by design with decent world building,  not gonna be fir everyone but it keeps things interesting if your willing to hang in there. I hope this story continues to go up and introduce other great characters. I put this on a parallel placing to Beware of Chicken in terms of early potential