The science of magic universe - The saint
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If this story had multiple points of view through the whole story i'd be completely for this takeaway to explain events of this character. But if that had been done it would've been pointless to split this into multiple books. simply put the first book had far too much focus on John and to just backtrack and go "now here's sophia" it feels like some bully came up and threw my german chocolate cake and said "here try this chocolate chocolate cake, i know you loved that german chocolate but duuuuude, eat this stuff!" all the while i'm staring at the destroyed remains of my favorite cake and begrudgingly eat the chocolate chocolate cake while thinking of the day i can go get more german chocolate again.
Chocolate Chocolate is good (Book2) but once you grow attached to German Chocolate (book 1) its hard to swallow the Chocolate Chocolate cake
Loved the original, loving this one just as much!! The concept of a prequel from another persons' point of view, I think, is a very good way to give more in depth backstory to the book and establish the world. The original MC from book 1 is supposed to be back in the third book, so I think this will be a very good way to build up background and stabilize the state of the world, as well as show how things were like in the same world for someone else!! Keep up the good work and ARIGATOU!!!!! :)
When you got done with volume 1 and wrote that johns adventures would resume in volume 4 I got kinda annoyed I got attached to that character the story was going fine and all of a sudden God eyes asends to a different plane the end. I mean was it really necessary to end it that abruptly? and then you tell me I wont see john for 2 volumes?
Well anyway this review is about volume 2 not volume 1. Most of the reason I don't like this story as much as volume 1 is because I honestly don't care about Sophia considering her church of dickheads tried to kill previous MC all volume 1 AND Sophia herself robbed us of a true ending to volume 1. Honestly the story of this volume is good I still like your writing style and everything it just feels like this should have been a side story and not an actual volume.
A very good and funny story, not the typical fantasy plot and nice pace, in my opinion better than the first volume regarding the writing style.
There is a lack of side characters tough (Kazimir and Sergei are a bit passive and their characters are not as defined).
Anyway, it made me laugh and I had a fun time reading *thumbs up*!
Love how you post these chapters so quickly makes me feel you’re not a human.
you should probably add a link to the previous story
thanks and don’t stop
OHHHH!!!!! I've been waiting!!! you should atleast paste the url in the previous volume
Its a good think I thought to read the update page are I'd have missed this.I would also say you should add a link in the last book so people can find this one.
When this novel first started, I thought it would be a minor spin-off of the other story by this author (The Heretic -- see his signature block at the end of any given chapter for the link). Yet, the more I read The Saint, the more I become interested in this story.
I decided to go back and read this from the beginning only to realize I hadn't voted yet! Now at chapter 121, I can say that the story is certainly good enough to stand on its own.
It is an interesting take on what happens when our modern-day world becomes increasingly exposed to magic. I definitely recommend it.
I do enjoy the storyline but I don't think a saint has a succubus friend army and lesbian sex every 4 chapters
If you enjoy a light hearted fun read then this is for you! I would and have recommended this to my family in real life.