Reborn into a RPG?

by cartyparty

If you were to die today, what would your final regret be? What if you were given another chance to fix it? Thrown into a world full of magic, demons, dragons and more; is Kyros. In this world of strong eat the weak, how will our protagonist adapt to survive?

Mature for 15+

First ever attempt at writing a story, literally. So please rate or just send me a review on a post/in private. It's all about improving right?


Currently busy with work so chapter releases will be sporadic, if released at all.

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Anime-Sensei
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Potential for a fantastic story

This story has been going strong so far and I eagerly await for more chapters. The MC is not a pushover and there's no harem yet , so come and check out this novel you most likely won't be disappointed.

theoglazer
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A very interesting story that always makes you crave more.

The story is very original and the quality doesn’t drop throughout. In my opinion this is one of the best fictions that I could find and I hope he carries on for a long time. :) ?

Mideanon
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a fun story (as of chapter 12)(subject to change)

 would happily see more

where did you disappear?

 

Pal5O
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Good job so far. I am looking forward to more chapters. I like the world building and build up.  I also like the chapters coming out quick one after another, keep them coming. 

Fenrryr
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Nice start need more for my review

hope more to review but is interesting 

 

 

 

 

CynicJester
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Sad to see the story devolve, with the MC suddenly developing a heart of gold seemingly out of the blue, turning into every cliche protagonist ever. You can have characters who care for other people without having them develop a hero complex.

Tiān gōng shén yàn
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cause if this was dropped im sad cause it was a good novel and it was just getting to the good damn part

ThousandRain
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Good story and Fucking MC

Mc sialan idiot. He is so dump. He no even try why magic work and to become his power.  And the character change is more even idottttttttty. 

mr.mas :3
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Boring..... and hate it.... so... gonna drop ittttt...

Hate a story about a slave... especially the one that is too naive.... soo... not gonna read it