Did I just become OP?

by SpectralApparition

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Romance Harem

No more~

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SpectralApparition

SpectralApparition

Apparition Domain

Achievements
3rd Anniversary
Good Commenter (II)
Word Wielder (II)
Group Leader (III)
I Am Ascending (IV)
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Galaxyjumper16
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I cant give you 5 stars yet but i think you've got a good start. You don't have any walls of text, you already have a basic personality for the MC and i enjoy your writing style. Keep it up, really hoping to see some more of this.

 

plus, I love the undertale reference 

T4roth
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Good start. More stars will come if it continues like this.

Good story so far and im sure if he can keep up with this and improve the writing with the experience he will have a keeper here on RL.

foufouu1
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good start!! continue like that and please don't be a slow releaser !!!

Sobek
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why does my review have to be 50 characters long I dont feel like writing 50 characters -_-