The Children of the Divine Limit

The Children of the Divine Limit

by Icanica

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

==  Posting 1000 - 1500 words various times a week for now. Warning! Warning! A slow burn! Also, participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge! ==

A galaxy-wide creator of life found its purpose for the first time since its birth eons ago. It had wanted to see how its most beloved child would live.

However, she has died, and the one who killed her has gained even more strength.

This divine being became enraged. It had never felt such pure hatred before. It behaved a bit recklessly as a result.

It called upon an ancient power, far above it in rank. This supreme authority chose to fulfill the deity's request for vengeance. But, He sent His cute little children in His stead. 

His two inexperienced kids, named Ajax and Shaula, were born as humans on the planet Earth. On the last day of their 12th grade, they are plucked from Earth by their Father and sent to a new world called Omicron. Here, they will face the greatest challenge of their lives so far, and take up the burden of their birthright.

Finding and killing a god should be the easy part of the story.

== This story is a reboot of my other story of the same name. I'm on Scribblehub too: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/548732/the-children-of-the-divine-limit/ ==

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122 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue Part 1 ago
Prologue Part 2 ago
1. Origin Part 1 ago
2. Origin Part 2 ago
3. Origin Part 3 ago
4. Future Part 1 ago
5. Future Part 2 ago
6. Future Part 3 ago
7. They Heard Part 1 ago
8. They Heard Part 2 ago
9. Destiny Part 1 ago
10. Destiny Part 2 ago
11. Destiny Part 3 ago
12. Awakening Part 1 ago
13. Awakening Part 2 ago
14. Awakening Part 3 ago
15. Adaptation Part 1 ago
16. Adaptation Part 2 ago
17. Adaptation Part 3 ago
18. Simple World Part 1 ago
19. Simple World Part 2 ago
20. Heights of Power Part 1 ago
21. Heights of Power Part 2 ago
22. Heights of Power Part 3 ago
23. Angelidis Part 1 ago
24. Angelidis Part 2 ago
25. Angelidis Part 3 ago
26. Meal Part 1 ago
27. Meal Part 2 ago
28. Their City Part 1 ago
29. Their City Part 2 ago
30. Their City Part 3 ago
31. Their City Part 4 ago
32. Their City Part 5 ago
33. Spirits and War Part 1 ago
34. Spirits and War Part 2 ago
35. Spirits and War Part 3 ago
36. Spirits and War Part 4 ago
37. The Good News Part 1 ago
38. The Good News Part 2 ago
39. The Good News Part 3 ago
40. The Good News Part 4 ago
41. The Good News Part 5 ago
42. Coincidences are Funny Part 1 ago
43. Coincidences are Funny Part 2 ago
44. Coincidences are Funny Part 3 ago
45. Coincidences are Funny Part 4 ago
46. What Other Life? Part 1 ago
47. What Other Life? Part 2 ago
48. The Festival Approaches Part 1 ago
49. The Festival Approaches Part 2 ago
50. The Festival Approaches Part 3 ago
51. Respite and Disturbance Part 1 ago
52. Respite and Disturbance Part 2 ago
53. Respite and Disturbance Part 3 ago
54. Respite and Disturbance Part 4 ago
55. Superior Violence Part 1 ago
56. Superior Violence Part 2 ago
57. Superior Violence Part 3 ago
58. Superior Violence Part 4 ago
59. Authority is Cruel Part 1 ago
60. Authority is Cruel Part 2 ago
61. Authority is Cruel Part 3 ago
62. Authority is Cruel Part 4 ago
63. Authority is Cruel Part 5 ago
64. Authority is Cruel Part 6 ago
65. Authority is Cruel Part 7 ago
66. Authority is Cruel Part 8 ago
67. Authority is Cruel Part 9 ago
68. Authority is Cruel Part 10 ago
69. Authority is Cruel Part 11 ago
70. Authority is Cruel Part 12 ago
71. Authority is Cruel Part 13 ago
72. Authority is Cruel Part 14 ago
73. Authority is Cruel Part 15 ago
74. Distraction Part 1 ago
75. Distraction Part 2 ago
76. Distraction Part 3 ago
77. Distraction Part 4 ago
78. Distraction Part 5 ago
79. The Threat of Force Part 1 ago
80. The Threat of Force Part 2 ago
81. The Threat of Force Part 3 ago
82. The Thief Toils Part 1 ago
83. The Thief Toils Part 2 ago
84. The Thief Toils Part 3 ago
85. The Thief Toils Part 4 ago
86. The Thief Toils Part 5 ago
87. The Thief Toils Part 6 ago
88. Unwanted Visitors Part 1 ago
89. Unwanted Visitors Part 2 ago
90. Unwanted Visitors Part 3 ago
91. Unwanted Visitors Part 4 ago
92. Impudent Part 1 ago
93. Impudent Part 2 ago
94. Impudent Part 3 ago
95. Impudent Part 4 ago
96. Impudent Part 5 ago
97. Impudent Part 6 ago
98. Impudent Part 7 ago
99. The Horror Part 1 ago
100. The Horror Part 2 ago
101. The Horror Part 3 ago
102. The Horror Part 4 ago
103. New Blood Part 1 ago
104. New Blood Part 2 ago
105. New Blood Part 3 ago
106. New Blood Part 4 ago
107. Shattering Part 1 ago
108. Shattering Part 2 ago
109. Shattering Part 3 ago
110. Shattering Part 4 ago
111. Fire Part 1 ago
112. Fire Part 2 ago
113. Fire Part 3 ago
114. Fire Part 4 ago
115. Fire Part 5 ago
116. Fire Part 6 ago
117. It Has To Be Like This Part 1 ago
118. It Has To Be Like This Part 2 ago
119. It Has To Be Like This Part 3 ago
120. It Has To Be Like This Part 4 ago

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Progression/Transmigration tale with a fresh style

Reviewed at: 19. Simple World Part 2

Really interesting take on a progression/transmigration story.  The writing style sets it apart:  it's omniscient 3rd person past/present/future back-story & world building mixed with dialog-heavy 2nd person perspective for the MCs.  

The 3rd person bits can be a little heavy on the 'info dump' side in the first several chapters, but this perspective isn't used nearly as much once the MC story takes center stage.  I'm still getting used to the overall style, and finding it 'kinda cool' on balance.  Definitely not a cookie-cutter web novel.

The MC story features Shaula and Ajax, who start their existences as regular humans on an earth-like planet with a Brit-style school system.  They're finishing secondary school exams to finalize their university admission & apprenticeship assignment as the story begins.

Of course, unbeknownst to them, they're actually godlings, and their god-father entity thingy known as the divine limit has decided it's time to pull them off of Earth & into their ascension journey.  Kinda sucks for them & their families, but apparently that's of no concern to the divine limit.  Dad's a hard-ass, it seems.  Might be some harsh learning coming up in this ascension thing.  😬

So why even bother setting the stage on Earth?  My guess is the author is using this to develop Shaula & Ajax's characters & friendship for us.  And they're pretty cool.  Smart, sarcastic, open & aware of each other's strengths, weaknesses, goals, interests, etc.  Their dialog seems genuine & well done & is the strongest part of the story so far.  Really enjoying how they keep their smart-ass young adult wits about them as they start to puzzle out what the hell happened to them and problem solve the new world they find themselves thrown into.

This is a rewrite of an earlier version of the story.  I'm not planning to read that version to avoid spoilers.  If it seems familiar, you probably read the previous version.

Great characters, interesting plot so far, unique non-cookie-cutter writing style.  Worth a try!