Sometimes, people really do fall off the face of the Earth.
That's when my work begins.
My name is Dillon Cross. I'm a private eye. I go places no one else can.
Isekai Detective is a linked set of short stories/novellas. Each Casebook tells a complete, standalone story. Updates Monday thru Friday.
18 AUG 22: The first Casebook is complete. Casebook 02 is coming soon.
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Reviewed as of chapter 4:
So far the story is an interesting twist on the usual isekai. While there hasn't been much room for character development so far, the author has done a good job of building up the MC without excessive info dumps.
Dillon, our main character, is also the narrator in a way that feels reminiscent of old school detective shows or novellas. If you are a fan of those, you may enjoy aspects of this story. He's not a "dark and gritty" caricature, but comes across as someone who knows what he's doing because he has lived it. Been there, done that, got the t-shirt. Quite literally it would seem.
I'm looking forward to how the story develops from here, and would recommend it if you are a fan of isekai and detective stories.
No major grammatical or spelling errors that I noticed. Overall story flow is good.