A modern man finds himself reincarnated in the body of a young slave with no skills and quickly fading memories. Follow his journey to find normalcy while living in a savage world, filled with myth and legends, monsters and Demons. In a land where the strong rule, the weak serve, and bloodshed is a way of life, peace is a luxury few can afford.
Author's note: Expect a chapter every tues/thurs/sun, unless I start writing faster. The story is eastern themed, but not Xianxia, no chasing immortality, MC is not OP. Less action, more character and world driven is my aim. Mature language and themes, but no raunchy sex. It's my first story, constructive criticism would be appreciated.
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This is really one of the best story on this site not as much action then other story but a good pace and and a real depth to the character definitely recomend it to all
like i sayed this is the best story i have read in months
the plot is amazing
love the background
the characters got real personalities and they are awesome
the comedy is funny
its just amazing
normally you always have 1 or 2 bad things to say but i got nothing and am up to date with chapters
the best story royalroadl has ever had
I enjoy this story because the MC has to meet challenges and develop as a person and a fighter. Not that an OP MC is something that I am against, but it is nice to have to the MC build himself up, like this one is doing. This is one of my favorite stories on RRL and I am hoping that the chapters keep coming out.
I started reading this story from the first day and I must say that i'm quite disappointed in myself for not giving a review since the ninth chapter. The story is original and unique, exposing the readers to the life of a former slave and how he has continued to grow from his trauma and depressed state in a fantasy world setting. The style fits perfectly with the narration while at the same time complimenting the creativity and ideas of the author. The pace is not slow and not fast either. Overall, the story is very good and if you are looking for a story with superb quality then I recommend you read this. Keep up the good work author-sama!
this is a exelent series, best i been reading until now, i mean it's hard to come along with someting this well balanced. good history, strong enough mc, and the side caracthers are well developed. the only thing tought i feel the history it's just a bit slow, it advance enough but think it will be better just a tiny bit faster. 10/10
Its a well made xianxia world and it cracks me up when Rain criticizes the bull**** aspects
of xianxia from the perspective of a reincarnated
I rate this as highly as I rate blood song, my favorite all time fantasy book. The story telling, pacing, character development, the first person singular pov style(which is very very hard to do well, most authors can't handle it and resort to multiple povs to pad the story just like blood song sequels and game of thrones series). It is super rare to find a fiction as well written as this without the author losing focus after a certain number of chapters. another big plus for this novel is how the author is able to present the world within without falling into the trap of 90% descriptions and 10% story progression. The main character's power progression is also perfect so far with story progression. This balancing act alone when writing shows pro level planning.
I do consider this to be the best fiction on this website. Better than most books I buy on amazon. I look forward to any future works by ruffwriter. I am 100% sure he will succeed if he decides to write a book.
edit: this review is for chapter 1-50.
The style is unique, brilliant, and engaging. It can e hard to portray first person perspective well, but this author has managed to do so splendidly.
The story is really, great, the world-building especially, the way that the author made me understand how this world works without me even realizing it, due to the lack of info dumps was outstanding.
I have yet to find a single grammatical error.
The character development is probably the best part of the story, re-incarnation stories can often be annoying self-inserts that the author uses to play out their fantasies, which leads to annoyingly poor character developments due to unrealistic reactions to the mc, but in this story, even the most minor characters, who might only appear for a few lines, are portrayed convincingly, in a way that you would think it was unfeasible for anything else to happen.
Seriously, read at least the first chapter of this story.
This is the kind of author I want to be when I grow up. Human characters (even when they're not, they're people), struggles, a really cool magic system and even mysteries! And an accidental pet harem. Truly the pinnacle of authorial life.
don't know if i already rated this story but here i come. won't give anything constructive sorry, i just enjoy reading this whilst listening to music. nothing complicated about it, i read some other reviews, and feel some peoples are born critics, i would love to read their work see something transcending time and space with it's high quality. Meanwhile i enjoy this story.