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The story starts off with a monotone voice announcing, "You have died.". The man receiving this news began to tremble on the ground, curled up in a fetal position. A large window entered his vision displaying the dreadful words in a blood-red mirk "You. Have. Died.", as if hearing it announced wasn't enough. The man began coughing, then chuckled. Laughter became manic as the trembling worsened.
The man opened his body, spreading his limbs out and screamed, "Finally! Finally! Finally!~". The man laughed hysterically before he sank to the ground. Another window displayed itself:
"Would you like to restart?
The laughing stopped, and silence consumed the atmosphere. The man became contemplative, slowly getting up and began walking. Pacing around usually helped his mind process his thoughts. After a while, he paused and eventually clapped his hands and exclaimed, "Nope! Who would want to go through that hell again?!".
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characters range from uninteresting to unlikable. the setting could be good with a tiny bit of introduction before the mc ignores multiple warnings and rejects reincarnation.
a lot of characters in fiction are impulsive, they make poor choices and that creates drams for the story. this mc doesnt do that. he makes the obvious bad choice as often as humanly posible. he seems adament in a bad choice then says he has no idea why he did that a few chapters later.
So, right now I'm only at chapter 1 (only 2 chapters have been uploaded) and the premise is really interesting! I know that is literally what the title of this review is saying but it's true and all of you should read it! This is my first review so I don't really know what else I should talk about, but yeah! Woo! Good book! Yeah! I'll update this review when more chapters get released probably. 😁😆
or else (you'll miss an awesome book!)