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Create a Legend (CAL) is the game where Legends are born.
Kit’s dream is a little different than most who join the virtual reality massive multiplayer online game. He is going to make his stamp on the world with his very own slice of heaven. He aims to open his own restaurant and hopefully turn it into the never achieved before level five restaurant.
Will he be able to succeed? Will he fade into the background like many others before him? Join Kit as he navigates the vast empire of CAL, trying to achieve his dream, meeting new friends and killing some monsters.[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
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I wanted to like Spartan Fire Restaurant. I very much did. But the grammar, spelling, and prose are... not great. The author doesn't seem to know that "tough" isn't spelled "tuff" or that sentences in quotation marks have commas if they continue (like this):
"This fiction isn't very good," said Ben. "I will go read something else."
I have a feeling the author is ESL. If so, I'm not going to really criticize him for something like this.
If it was well written with good spelling, grammar, prose, etc, I would give it 5 stars. The idea is good, but the writing is not.