My class [Death Knight] is just barely legal...

How to describe this series,  here you got Arthur a kid who was obsessively training to the point it was an addiction. In a world where your class can change aspects of your personality we have a kid whose obsession with training puts a gym bro to shame. 

The idea of a kid trying to be a noble knight in a death attuned class us interesting, while not to the level of drizzt dourden Arthur will face alot of racism and discrimination if his affinity is discovered I eagerly await the next update

40 chapters in and the plot armor and MC just don't go away. The best part of this series are the litrpg elements but the writing, world building, characters and plot just aren't there. Maybe if the MC boosts his int he'll make smarter decisions but I'm afraid it might be too little too late.

Th nove lis well written and it has a solid good plot. No major cliches and so far no there were no stupid characters. The MC and his friend have solid character development and feel real. Overall one of the best I've read in this website. Would recommend this to everyone.

A pretty standard fantasy world with system story, where it shines however is going slice of life for the MC with his unlikely class.

The fights are pretty good, the world building is actual really good considering the style of the story so far, but the best bit is the system despite being very well described isn't a perfectly accepted thing. People actually have some complex feelings about it. Nature versus nurture comes up in regards to affinity several times. People complain about the exponential exp curve in leveling skills. Even the MC debates skills based around what he doesn't want the system doing.

It's a lot of realism for the system, which is interesting as most stories don't go that way.

Anyway it's a good low fantasy read and formatted chapter by chapter so it's easy to pick up and read a few chapters here and there.

"I was thinking of a death knight that goes on a crusade with hot tsundere holy maiden of the church
that degenerate thought turned into my premise"                                                        -Belgianfri 

I don't think anything else needs to be said. This is a good story with nice characters, great grammar, a simple and straightforward system of progression and pretty good worldbuilding. If you like most other fantasy world + system stories on Royal Road, you'll definitely like this too. Bonus points for giving the main character a decent name. Also, despite the quote at the top, he will not be travelling with a hot tsundere maiden of the church. Actually, he might still do that. I don't know. But as of now, there are no tsunderes in sight.

Maybe I've edited this later, but it was originally written on June 1st, 2022.

It a good story hopeful there is some character  maturity it early to tell but so far really good.   I don't give out review  out easily  please don't make me  regret it by going on a (indefinitely) hiatus  and  then drop the story quoting a mental health which is a catch all for i dont know what  to write 

It was very engaging and fast-acting.  I like the twist he did with a darker cast type of what would normally be an evil undead creature.   I also like how he explores the ideas of how much fate drives our actions versus our own moral choice.   He also really considers how a character would act at different ages.  At first, though it leaves an innocent feeling to the book because the boy does start off just that innocent. But as the boy does not stay innocent as learns of life and grows so the book grows in feeling more mature as well.  It is definitely a great coming of age story so far. The mood is kept light and fun yet does not avoid serious issues in life or touch on the dark side of the character or the world.  His use of humor in some difficult situations the character finds himself in is well done.  Honestly, I would consider it a great young adult book as it is now and would have it on my shelves at school for my students to read. Especially since it addresses moral issues students at a middle school and high school age struggle with.

just been a fun read so far good bones to build on , have not seen any glareing flaws so far been. Great work and keep it up this may be my new daily reader at this point i feel i am filling out the review so they will let me post it so one more time thank you and keep it up and may i say i have always been a fan undead anything fav race in warlords battlecry 3 thanks and enjoy sorry dont review offten 

Honestly one of the better prologues I have read. The characters feel realistic, especially the scene between Art and his parents. The class is cool and was achieved in unique way. 

I found no issues with style/grammar/proses which is impressive considering the Author says their native language isn't English. But I also wouldn't consider the writing style to be perfect due to its rather simple use of language which is fine, not all novels need to be filled with flowery language...

So far I have only found one problem with the novel.

The lack of scene descriptions.

Overall its been an enjoyable read so far, would recommend it to anyone and I will continue to read it and update this review as I go.

Progression Litrpg.

MC starts off weak in a harsh world. Given an option of an escape he embraces it like a modern day gamer on the grind.

Gets a rare option, has to accept the risks.

Story moves fast paced but doesn't seem too rushed. Its got enough backstory grind to make it seem believable. 

World building is nice. Witcher feels are stronger.

GIve it a go. Good read so far.