Master of All, Jack of None

by Mythran

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Harem Martial Arts Virtual Reality
17 year old Ren Haddon hasn't had an easy life, the child of a pair of drug addicts that used him as a lab rat left him almost crippled for life, after they were caught he went on to spend his life in hospital under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew, until that day, the day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game Flow ('Fantasy Life Online World')
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Steelz
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Great FF. A review and a small complaint.

This FF is really good, though somewhat overused class of "art related" in FF since LMS but it doesn't really matter. I really like the story of how there's a cute kid which is actually 17 years old and goes into virtual reality instead of something like an old guys mentality reincarnated into a small child which gives a new vibe to it. Also the incest part also adds spice to the FF seeing how innocent he's (like a kid) and how these girls keep pesking him. My complaint is that why is the short tempered girl and the black guy seem as an hindrance to the company? I am pretty sure if it were to happen in real life they wouldn't seem to have any problem with that. Also please increase the blacksmith mastery pace, I like how you make it long but it's getting too long now.

SevenWays1
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I found it incredibly interesting and the story kept me going through it, i felt as though the characters could have used a tinsy bit more depth but as the story progressed this became less and less of an issue for me. The grammar was good and if the other tops can get away with worse I don't see why a couple of mistakes should be a problem~ keep up the good work!

Raganork22k
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I love ths slow but deatild pase of this FF I could wish for a little more content each chapter … but it won’t stop me from checking if a new ones out every day!

FFaddicted
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awsome story keep up the awsome work! :D

really intresed , i love storyes with crafting and i trully want to see more of this! :D keep up the good work! :D
Botyok
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GOOD STORY and EASY TO LOVE CHARACTER

Overall, the story is good. The character is adorable and is one of the easiest MC to like (and love). The NPCs are interesting as well, especially their interaction with the MC. Though the  flow of the story is as they call it,  slow, but I don’t mind. ‘Cause for me, mastering skills are better than plain leveling( in my opinion. which is an OP MC key ingredient) (^-^) to Mythran: Thank you for sharing with us this wonderful story. Good job and Keep  up the good work! Also hoping for MOAR updates!!!
minchin
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THANK YOU!!!   One of my favorite fanfic stories. Please update more!! :D    
aswad12
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This is one of my favorite,   as i love to see, how author develop Ren growth slowly.   Good Work Author,   for other advance review, am my self don’t know to review about that, since English not my primary language, though I can understand english, but my level of understanding only as far as high-schooler level though.   Any way, best regard to the author. Nice Work.
Kriel
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Great story and characters

What an awesome ff. if it weren't for some mistakes on the grammar like the "women" should have been just "woman", I would have never guessed that this was an FF. I like the mc's story about his childhood being so horrible but that didn't stop him from looking for a brighter future and being thankful about the little things in life that most of us took for granted. It's hard not to sympathize with This kind of misfortune, it would really get most readers(normal humans who still has a soul) to feel happy for the mc whenever he achieve's his goals one step at a time and really root for him to get stronger and get show those other 4 that he can be just as good or even better than them. I know it's just getting started but I'm looking forward to when he starts adventuring and taking on huge quests and meet some true companions along the way. I'm expecting to see some girls being his companions in game to take a liking to him due to his appearance but I do hope that it won't get to a point where all his companions would have a "thing" for his appearance. (Pedo's). I hope to see a rival other than those 4 bastards, maybe someone who found their very own unique class within the game that won't lose to any of the five classes in terms of stats and abilities. The story details are great but for me the story's pace is a bit slow or maybe this is just me saying "I really can't wait for him to mop the floor with those pretentious snot nosed bastards". Well anyways keep up the good work coz you have another fan here that wants more!
TriangleKayes08
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I can’t really say if there’s anything special about. I just find this enjoyable to read. It’s enjoyable and relaxing to have something so simple, straightforward, and CONSISTENTLY GOOD. Hooray for good ol' hard work! It would be nice if we could at least know when the MC’s gonna actually start playing the game, don’t rush though-the build up is great and makes it all the more tantalizing.
GrumpyHobo
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Almost at the great level

This story is really enjoyable, it just is missing that little thing to push it over from pretty good to great.  I myself don't really know what that thing really is.  The only real problem i have with the story is that I can't really relate to the MC at all, and I can't really understand his mode of thinking.  I get how he enjoys all the little things in life now because of his past, but i'd also think he'd have a little emotional trauma beyond simply being afraid of needles now.  He just seems to happy for all the shit that has gone on in his life.  Maybe he's just covering it up so other people don't pity him or something like that?  Whatever it is it would be great if we could have a little bit clearer idea of the inner workings of the MC's head.  Who he REALLY is and what he REALLY wants, because I can't really tell.  But that's just me nitpicking and trying to give a little constructive criticism.  I love the story and can't wait for each additional chapter.