Master of All, Jack of None

by Mythran

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Harem Martial Arts Virtual Reality
17 year old Ren Haddon hasn't had an easy life, the child of a pair of drug addicts that used him as a lab rat left him almost crippled for life, after they were caught he went on to spend his life in hospital under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew, until that day, the day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game Flow ('Fantasy Life Online World')
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koog008
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This story is awesome.  One of my top favorite FF.  Even though its focus on Crafting right now its so dam good.  The author puts so much detail into the story that even if hes just mining an ore, its entertaining.  I just want MORE.

zodiac
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i hope 2 see more soon lookin 4word to when his real class change back 2 the original  i thought it was only 4 a moth hasent that much time pass alredy?

LostAndContent
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 Love it.  Want it to update at least once a day.   It's the one who inspired me to start writing on this site.   I firmly believe this should be the best rated fiction on this site.

solostaran
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Beyond nice, just below awesome

The style, and the characters are flawless, i mean, you could use some extra players, no just the as****es, but you could also introduce some incidents with some future characters.

 

If I had to point somethig it would be the history. What you have in here is simply amazing, and i live it, just... some more speed, i mean, it's been 12 chapters, and he's going to his first action mission, i know the class and the crafts had to be properly presented, but the main action so far has been him running away from wolves and a golem (hilarious, by the way).

 

I can only say, i hope you can start releasing regularly, but, anyway, count me a fan of your work.

rkieran2
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Great but Ren needs friends

Great story and I love Ren as a character. The MC is smart, determined, and resourceful and a great character to read about.  The only problem I really have with the story is one that quite a few of these fanfics have, Ren never interacts with the other players. When he does meet other players they tend to be shallow and vapid shells of people.

seedofdestruction
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It's goooooooood.

The story is great and the MC is realy adorable

ikkpatel
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Def one of the most enjoyable to read and one of the best I've come across!!

 

unfortunately  the chapters have slowed down...

 

but it's still really good 

cuttime
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I'm not a kid!....You know what, I give up.

lol

 

I love the story. And the character.

The only thing I'd like to suggest would be to make the nurses a bit less generic and more personal. Like, giving them names and personalities of their own maybe?

The adventures in the game are fun and the characters are interesting, too, pretty unique in the way he starts doing things. It's great that you managed to make a rpg story where the main Char doesn't start going 'me hulk, me crush evil monsters'!

Taylin
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 I Really like what I have read of this story so far. It is well written and quite interesting.

DemonWing
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A lot of the time I read books on this site they are decent. This one is the exception. I love the character, the developments, and the setting. The only thing I am disappointed about is the slow releases. Although as a fellow writer I understand the struggle. Keep up the good work I am awaiting the next chapter.