Master of All, Jack of None

by Mythran

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Harem Martial Arts Virtual Reality
17 year old Ren Haddon hasn't had an easy life, the child of a pair of drug addicts that used him as a lab rat left him almost crippled for life, after they were caught he went on to spend his life in hospital under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew, until that day, the day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game Flow ('Fantasy Life Online World')
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joman
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What is wrong wtih

In every good fan novel I read  they come out and dis the author on everything! I am like WTF! Your so called reviews are causing authors to stop writing I bet. What probably happened was these guys from “the group” wrote a novel and no one liked it, so they write crap on others because they are jealous. These fanfic authours are still developing the character and are writing at a different angle. For “The group” i give a .5/50 only because there reviews do have some things that can make it better. Don’t rate “the group” just give helpful tips and support these authors instead of tearing them down.

Steelz
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Great FF. A review and a small complaint.

This FF is really good, though somewhat overused class of "art related" in FF since LMS but it doesn't really matter. I really like the story of how there's a cute kid which is actually 17 years old and goes into virtual reality instead of something like an old guys mentality reincarnated into a small child which gives a new vibe to it. Also the incest part also adds spice to the FF seeing how innocent he's (like a kid) and how these girls keep pesking him. My complaint is that why is the short tempered girl and the black guy seem as an hindrance to the company? I am pretty sure if it were to happen in real life they wouldn't seem to have any problem with that. Also please increase the blacksmith mastery pace, I like how you make it long but it's getting too long now.

Botyok
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GOOD STORY and EASY TO LOVE CHARACTER

Overall, the story is good. The character is adorable and is one of the easiest MC to like (and love). The NPCs are interesting as well, especially their interaction with the MC. Though the  flow of the story is as they call it,  slow, but I don’t mind. ‘Cause for me, mastering skills are better than plain leveling( in my opinion. which is an OP MC key ingredient) (^-^) to Mythran: Thank you for sharing with us this wonderful story. Good job and Keep  up the good work! Also hoping for MOAR updates!!!
vkg313
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Im really enjoying this!  Please keep it up!   All of the work describing all of the different trades is amazing, while keeping the story upbeat
FFaddicted
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awsome story keep up the awsome work! :D

really intresed , i love storyes with crafting and i trully want to see more of this! :D keep up the good work! :D
Raganork22k
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Really enjoying this FF

I love ths slow but deatild pase of this FF I could wish for a little more content each chapter … but it won’t stop me from checking if a new ones out every day!

solostaran
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Beyond nice, just below awesome

The style, and the characters are flawless, i mean, you could use some extra players, no just the as****es, but you could also introduce some incidents with some future characters.

 

If I had to point somethig it would be the history. What you have in here is simply amazing, and i live it, just... some more speed, i mean, it's been 12 chapters, and he's going to his first action mission, i know the class and the crafts had to be properly presented, but the main action so far has been him running away from wolves and a golem (hilarious, by the way).

 

I can only say, i hope you can start releasing regularly, but, anyway, count me a fan of your work.

DemonWing
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A lot of the time I read books on this site they are decent. This one is the exception. I love the character, the developments, and the setting. The only thing I am disappointed about is the slow releases. Although as a fellow writer I understand the struggle. Keep up the good work I am awaiting the next chapter.

rkieran2
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Great but Ren needs friends

Great story and I love Ren as a character. The MC is smart, determined, and resourceful and a great character to read about.  The only problem I really have with the story is one that quite a few of these fanfics have, Ren never interacts with the other players. When he does meet other players they tend to be shallow and vapid shells of people.

Kriel
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Great story and characters

What an awesome ff. if it weren't for some mistakes on the grammar like the "women" should have been just "woman", I would have never guessed that this was an FF. I like the mc's story about his childhood being so horrible but that didn't stop him from looking for a brighter future and being thankful about the little things in life that most of us took for granted. It's hard not to sympathize with This kind of misfortune, it would really get most readers(normal humans who still has a soul) to feel happy for the mc whenever he achieve's his goals one step at a time and really root for him to get stronger and get show those other 4 that he can be just as good or even better than them. I know it's just getting started but I'm looking forward to when he starts adventuring and taking on huge quests and meet some true companions along the way. I'm expecting to see some girls being his companions in game to take a liking to him due to his appearance but I do hope that it won't get to a point where all his companions would have a "thing" for his appearance. (Pedo's). I hope to see a rival other than those 4 bastards, maybe someone who found their very own unique class within the game that won't lose to any of the five classes in terms of stats and abilities. The story details are great but for me the story's pace is a bit slow or maybe this is just me saying "I really can't wait for him to mop the floor with those pretentious snot nosed bastards". Well anyways keep up the good work coz you have another fan here that wants more!