Master of All, Jack of None

by Mythran

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Harem Martial Arts Virtual Reality
17 year old Ren Haddon hasn't had an easy life, the child of a pair of drug addicts that used him as a lab rat left him almost crippled for life, after they were caught he went on to spend his life in hospital under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew, until that day, the day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game Flow ('Fantasy Life Online World')
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dns7950
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Awesome story, can't wait for more chapters!

Reigsta Di Raizel
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A real nice story that takes you with you from the beginning. I really enjoyed the story when I read it. It was a enjoyebel experience to read it especially with the Sept of the background of the characters that author did. 

David Will
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I really enjoyed the story as told thus far. I was disappointed to see it end, but I see that someone else picked up the story and continued it. While I do wonder what would have happened differently if this author had continued it, I still enjoyed what they wrote.

The Infinice
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Read original, read continuation at your own risk

If you're looking for a somewhat professional review,move along. This isn't one.

 

Tjis story is a crafting story at it's most fundamental concept. Slow but steady character development, a main character who slowly learns about life and love, maturing in the process of undergoing the pains that both can bring to the heart and soul.

Seriously, it's great and all that, but the main character in the continuation has really shitty luck with love. I don't know if it's the author imprinting his life experiences on the main character or not, but he just keeps getting screwed over by "his trouble recipe".

His first love overreacts to a simple mistake and dumps him.

His second overreacts and dumps him, annulling their marriage contract and any hopes of saving it in light of his looming deadline of getting kicked out ofthe kingdom.

I couldn't stomach it anymore, and dropped reading the continuation. If you are like me, who hates with a passion the emotional trauma that characters undergo because you are;

A) Highly empathetic and thus highly emotionally invested in the story,

or B) You see yourself in the main character for any number of reasons. Like going on an adventure, crafting crap, etc.

TL;DR: Original is good. Continuation is good only for some. Stay away fron continuation if you hate fluffy romances being ripped apart due to stupidity/overreactions. Read at yourown risk in that case.

Luke Scheffe
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I feel obligated to review this due to the sheer amount of time spent reading this and it's continuation

JustAnAddict
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Why is this still popular? It hasn't been updated for years. I could accept it if the story was worth a damn, but it's just plain bad! It's just another stupid rags to riches, power fantasy, isekai, bullshit LitRPG. Please downrate it so we can get it out of the top 50.

user 1441
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Amusing, worth reading!!!

I was originally drawn to https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/8220/mythrans-master-of-all-continued, and saw that this book was first.  Great read!

Paengisnotmyname
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I Like......No Love It So Far- My First Review

Although I'm giving it way too much love I thoroughly enjoyed this story as I read through it. I like the concept, the grammar(sometimes), and how you have designed it so far regarding storyline and etc.

May you continue this story for this is the kind of thing I need nowadays because of the burdens of school and reality.Keep up the good work my dude and have a grand ol' time in life. This is the second time I'm posting this cause of my ratings..........they have to be higher!

wohlzy
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What to do after reading 16 chapters.

To Everybody wondering, Mythran (the author) can be considered "gone but not forgotten".

To the starving readers out there, know that someone, a big fan of this story, decided to keep the story alive and started writing the following chapters after 1 year without news from original author but still giving all credits to him.

Of course the style is a bit different but spirit stay more or less the same.

at the time I write the review, this new author is 700+ chapters in Ren's adventure with more than 2 million words. Give it a try ;)

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/8220/mythrans-master-of-all-continued

Lucien of the Old Blood
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I like it, but for the love of Cygnas......

Awesome story, amazing actually. I just love crafting and skill ups and this is what I get. I don't have the ability to point out any flaws in the story, especially since it ended with so few chapters before it was taken over by another. I do however need to point out a simple yet major issue, the only thing that annoys me.

 

All the girls are pedophile sluts. I just don't get it. I don't like insults, and I am genuinely not trying to insult either author of this work, but I can't imagine anybody but an inexperienced virgin of incredibly young age, without any experience even talking with women, being able to even think of writing anything like this. Not trying to insult anyone, but seriously.

 

God the girls are so annoying..... So many pedophiles in your story. I understand lolicons, because as long as you're careful you can at least have a fulfilling sex life and a real relationship, but what are these girls expecting from this brat? A 12 year old dick is practically nothing, not even able to pleasure girls their own age let alone anyone even slightly bigger than himself. And don't go giving me the bullshit he has the body of a 12 year old but the dick of a man like his age would suggest, stunted growth also affects the dick.

 

If men are interested him then I could see it, but to have every woman be some pedophilic whore who gets wet imagining a 12 year old body with a dick smaller and thinner than his fingers is just crazy.

 

Anyway, 3 stars. 3 because despite a glaringly obvious issue, I can still enjoy the story. At least if the MC was a little girl or something it'd make some sense. I know the crazy horny pedophile sluts with no knowledge of anatomy only get worse as the story progresses, but I hope that the crafting and world building make up for it.