Master of All, Jack of None

by Mythran

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Harem Martial Arts Virtual Reality
17 year old Ren Haddon hasn't had an easy life, the child of a pair of drug addicts that used him as a lab rat left him almost crippled for life, after they were caught he went on to spend his life in hospital under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew, until that day, the day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game Flow ('Fantasy Life Online World')
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marineopferman
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good story needs insight.

So far I really do enjoy your story but we practically know nothing about anyone even his own city, so can we please get more details and maybe even some side stories on the other winners?

Magus
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Also an adventure in a leage of it's own ;P Damn awesome!

I like the slow character development, but the possibility for rapid skill learning ^^

Furthermore, the MC starts as an average guy, and does not have martial arts skills. This makes it more easier to connect to the MC for most people out there ;-)

 

++ Especially the joy from the MC towards all new jobs, makes this adventure enjoyable!

++ The pace of the adventure is beyond excellent (keep it like this), each skill-learning takes time.

Vampwalker
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Love the class you gave him hope to see him humiliate that prince charming douche in the future.

Docnox
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A nice slow moving story

an enjoyable read, a bit slow lately on the updates, nothing else really to fault but i still cant give it the same 5 stars as a couple of the others currently in the top 5. the funny moments arent quite laugh out loud but they can get a chuckle, the mc is fairly well represented but sometimes im not sure what to make of his personality. like i said its by no means bad but theres always room to improve.

slime313
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I love the MC in this story. He just has such a lovable personality, he is as hardworking as Weed in LMS but not as detestable in certain aspects. I hope it gets a development similar to LMS's seoyoon, or whatever her name is.. (haven't reread LMS in ages). Lovin how the MC is progressing thou! ^-^

dns7950
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Awesome story, can't wait for more chapters!

Stupidiot
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This series is slowly develeoping and very succinctly doing so. It has a very strong protagonist who knows how to get what he wants. He is put into a harsh situation and is able to overcome it through sheer will and perseverance. 

The story is well done and very clean, its currently top 1 and deserves to be in that spot. If I were to have any gripe it would be the speed of production, but then again you can't rush quality.

obatrana
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YOU HAVE A 10 FROM ME !

The FF deserves the ratings of perfect or almost perfect. Even if it isn't all about action and adventure and OP MC it is among the best FF out there not only on this site. Even if it goes slow it goes perfect. The grammar, the story line, the ideas are great. I seriously hope that the FF will continue for a loooong looooooong time :).

Ulvr
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@Argos / The Group

Please take into consideration that he was basically a guinea pig for his parents so he most likely did not have much of a childhood beside being experimented on. so when he gets to act a bit like a child from doing something he never would be capable of doing in the real world of course he would be happy and giddy, and child like as he probably gave up on ever being able to do the things we would take for granted.

I agree with some of what you said (Argos) - not enough inner monologue to get a better idea of his character.

I still like this story very much and will continue to be a fan.

ajrswim2000
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I really loved what’s been written so far.  This story is unique enough that it can be considered the author’s own work rather than just fan fiction.  The quality is good and the story in engaging. I urge the author to continue developing this story, keep writing, and when the story is complete definitely publish it on Amazon.