Master of All, Jack of None

by Mythran

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Harem Martial Arts Virtual Reality
17 year old Ren Haddon hasn't had an easy life, the child of a pair of drug addicts that used him as a lab rat left him almost crippled for life, after they were caught he went on to spend his life in hospital under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew, until that day, the day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game Flow ('Fantasy Life Online World')
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nBosega
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Very engaging

 

i love that the author is taking the time to develop the protagonist properly and doesn’t rush  through his development in favor of flashy sequences; elf-ling  running out of the cave was funny. I just wish the Author would put out chapters faster. perhaps I’m just hungry for more

Bokuboy
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Nice original take on gaming

Great MC. Likable and friendly. Getting powerful just from crafting is neat. Really enjoyed the story so far. I can only hope it gets picked back up and continued.

HerrMaickel
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Thanks for the story, hopefully you'll continue it some time :)

KrisWoodsman
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Well worth reading, Hopefully author will finish

The story stars off slow but has a solid pace allowing the story to build momentum without a jerking feeling. The quality of the writing is solid and characterization is consistent with potential  for more multi-faceted personalities as the story develops. The author seems to be on a hiatus at the moment due to concerns in his life.

 

There are some minor grammatical errors but nothing disconcerting.  Thoughts and actions are well described with the appropriate amount of detail. Paragraphs are solid and walls of text are largely avoided as are one line blitzes.

LokiTricks
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Well this is my first review and I have to say pretty good I\'ve read a lot of this kind of stories and i have to say i love the build-up  to the main character\'s progression. I can see that unlike most stories you have taken a less taken route I have seen so far and i like it we get to see the character get stronger not by luck but by hard work and his character which is good. The other character work needs a little bit of tuning but its just we need to know more about the characters but in time we\'ll see. I have a good feeling about this story but other than that no problems with me it ranks to me a great 4.75/5 in my opinion keep up the good work and i hope to hear more from this story again.

CavemanTV
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Can't Wait For The Next Chapter Cuz Stuff... Yeah I don't have anything to say except it's AWESOME!

 

sa1880612m
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As I just recently signed up I am going back through the fictions I had
previously read. This is one of them. As I have not just finished it my
ratings are likely to be a touch more critical than if I had just finished.

 

Thus far the story has been enjoyable to me. Having read it though I feel like if I were able to draw and tried to make a manga of this story the art that would suit it best would be something cutesy or chibi like. I can't help but think of it like Iris Zero. This story probably benefited from being about a character into crafting professions. The grammar rating is totally made up, I don't remember the grammar but the fact that I associate it with chibi images makes me think this fiction is one of those I found to be slightly worse on that aspect. On the other hand character gets a boost from that association and the fact that it has the comedy tag.

 

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Overall:
This is a subjective comparative scale.
1 Star means that on top of dropping the story I also would
not under any circumstance recommend it. I don't expect to give
this out very often.
2 Stars means that while I dropped the story there are some circumstances
in which I would recommend it, but that there is a flaw in the story that
I can't personally overlook and believe that at least some others will be
unable to as well.
3 Stars means that I view the rated work as being of roughly the same as
any ln/wn that I have read. While I may still drop a story with this
rating doing so means that I personally didn't get into it, not that
I see anything wrong with that story.
4 Stars means that there is some aspect of the story that I really liked.
One of the things that will push from 3 stars to 4 stars is having an
element I haven't seen or haven't seen often.
5 Stars means that I would/will/would like to/ or have put my money where
my mouth is in support of the author. I don't expect to give this out very
often.
Style/Story/Grammar/Character
I will only define 1,3,5 stars for these sections and the ratings will
correspond to terrible, passable, and good respectively. Terrible general
means I dropped or wanted to drop the story because of something in that
category. Passable means that the story was enjoyable for me but at times
I needed to actively overlook some flaws in that category. Good means that
I just read through story enjoying it. Final note: While english is my
first language I am not great at grammar so a higher rating there does not
indicate no grammatical errors.

Magus
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Also an adventure in a leage of it's own ;P Damn awesome!

I like the slow character development, but the possibility for rapid skill learning ^^

Furthermore, the MC starts as an average guy, and does not have martial arts skills. This makes it more easier to connect to the MC for most people out there ;-)

 

++ Especially the joy from the MC towards all new jobs, makes this adventure enjoyable!

++ The pace of the adventure is beyond excellent (keep it like this), each skill-learning takes time.

stratosdragon
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I got to say I was interested in reading  your fanfic after reading the description but was reluctant to because of having to having to wait for to many fanfic that I'm currently reading as well as give you time to release more chapters. But now I'm excited to see more releases after read the current released chapters and the Mc reminds me of the Mc from a novel called knight & magic since he also has the appearance of a cute little boy despite his age girls  just can't help treating him like a huggable toy with a few head patting and arkward moments.

Ye Chun Hwa
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Slow releases but too good to bash !

Love the concept of a support character with high potential ! Reminds me a of Arifureta ! So far he has also fallen down into an abyss ! Great work can't wait to see the rest !