Master of All, Jack of None
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the story is very interesting and keeps you hooked because the mc keeps doing interesting things and never gives up. i think the author has dropped it but another author has picked it up: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/8220
- One adult female is supposed to be called a ‘woman’, not a ‘women’. Fix this and I’ll up the grammar score.
- Issues with plural forms. For example more than one RPG is spelled RPGs, NPC -> NPCs, leisure’s -> leisure, hole’s -> holes, aura’s -> auras, magic’s -> magic, penalty’s -> penalties (Some of these are common mistakes, but mistakes nonetheless.) There are similar issues with apostrophes elsewhere as well.
- A couple of issues with there/their/they’re, but it’s not consistent so could just be typos. (This did not affect my grammar score)
A real nice story that takes you with you from the beginning. I really enjoyed the story when I read it. It was a enjoyebel experience to read it especially with the Sept of the background of the characters that author did.
This story is very interesting going all crafting with not much action.It is one of a kind.I expected a Mecha kinda thing to happen but too bad it hasnt been updated in 7 months Hope the author reads thins and restarts this amazing series
To be specific, my only beef with this story is the way in which the adversarial characters are portrayed. The three players who beat the MC are basically avatars of assholery. They appear to have no depth of personality besides just generally being irritating snobs. While they may play only a secondary role so-far, they still are the MC's main adversaries, so fleshing them out and making them resemble human beings by giving them more than a single thought/feeling would be beneficial in the long run, and would make the fanfiction better as a whole. :)
Great MC. Likable and friendly. Getting powerful just from crafting is neat. Really enjoyed the story so far. I can only hope it gets picked back up and continued.