Lillia has always wanted to become a mage, and to her great relief, she is accepted into a magic school: Norvale's All-Girl Academy for Young Mages. However, there is one big problem - Lillia isn't very good at magic. As she begins to feel her dreams slip away, an older student gives her a powerful magical amulet and invites her to join a secret coven. But when Lillia's magic goes awry, and she is attacked by a wraith (a creature made from death and magic), she starts to sense something dark is brewing in the town of Berensford. 

To become the mage she has always dreamed of being, Lillia is forced to come face-to-face with the darker side of magic: mysterious symbols that appear out of nowhere; ferocious beasts that stalk the local forest; and arcane rituals to raise the dead. Lillia will need to rise to the occasion and display bravery past her years if she hopes to persevere and save not only herself but her friends and loved ones as well.

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