I Want to Be the Emperor, so I'll Fight Tooth and Nail to Achieve my Goal

I Want to Be the Emperor, so I'll Fight Tooth and Nail to Achieve my Goal

by TheFailedDev

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Alden Lyons awakes in the clinic of a strange fantasy world, uncertain of where he is and how he got there. Stranger still, he has been granted a power known as the All-Maker, which he unwittingly uses to give himself RPG-like abilities. Leveraging his new found power and the good will of those around him, Alden sets his eyes on the throne.

Current Release Schedule: Friday 11:15AM & Saturday 4:30PM Eastern time for the free release. Patrons receive both chapters a week early on Saturday 4:30PM. 

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Disce_Iterum
Overall

So far the story is very interesting. With the ability to make new abilities (heh) has the potential to lead to absolute OP'ness later on, the MC isn't broken yet and still has struggles so it thankfully isnt a simple snoozefest of curbstomping all his enemies and we get to see some nice (albeit rather fast) progression of their abilities.

 

Would rate 5* but dont feel like there's enough content yet to give the story a proper analysis to justify it.

 

All in all of you want to read about an MC with potential to be op but still has that skill grind then this story will keep your attention.

EternalSlave
Overall

It is a very good story. Worth to read. Beautifully executed. The plot is good and grammar is excellent. I have only spotted a few typing errors but it happens. Nothing to take seriously. The main character is well fleshed out. As well as the other side characters. As for his one special ability, that is the main attracting thing. Infinite possibiliteis. Keep up the good work author. I hope you suceed.