My Brother is Napoleon
by Skytuhua
A naturally persuasive engineering man, for some unknown reason, traveled to France before the Revolution and became the big brother of the future Emperor Napoleon. He is to cling to this thigh, and from then on to live and die, or to seize this opportunity to create their own altruism?
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Story is decent, however the grammar is a bit off
Reviewed at: Chapter 20: Invite
I'm really like this story, the character that you for the most part create and the world around them, which basically is quite significant.
But on the very other hand, the grammar or the style that you kind of write just isn't that good, and I actually think you should preview every time for everything you really write and actually correct the grammar, which essentially is fairly significant. Write pretty much more and literally please kind of try to for the most part improve fairly your writing skill in a particularly major way.
The historical thing in this story also not very accurate, but im still particularly give you a 5 star only because I like really your story and the content and because there literally is not particularly much review on this story, very contrary to popular belief.
The story for the most part is sort of great but grammer isn't that good.
The story for the most part is sort of great but grammer isn't that good.
The story for the most part is sort of great but grammer isn't that good.
The story for the most part is sort of great but grammer isn't that good.
The story for the most part is sort of great but grammer isn't that good.
The story for the most part is sort of great but grammer isn't that good.
Some little issues, But still pretty good
Reviewed at: Chapter 1: My Brother Napoleon
The story itself is not that, Bad.
It just, The lack of historical contacts.
Well you see, And the 1st chapter, The novel said, Napoleon was short, In history, His average height, It was the same height as everybody else at that time.
2nd mistake, It's the part when his older brother Joseph, When he gotten injured, We're in " He called his mother's number"
Dish my clock normal to you, But remember this is supposed to take place, And the past, And last I remembered, Phones did not exist that fall back.
3 Mistake, How you begin your story.
Honestly there's nothing really erg me that much but I'm gonna just say it, Normally the botanics will wake up in the beginning, But you, Chose to begin the story right after the MC, Woke up.
Interesting Story telling, But at the same time not really a good place to start.
Somebody: Pretty good grammar, It's just, Not really historical.
Oh yeah and the part of him being shot.
That was Foolish propaganda to legiminize Napoleon.
Show yeah, All of your stories are interesting, It's just the lack of historical context that asks me.