Raising A Monster Empire In Another World

Raising A Monster Empire In Another World

by Monster_King

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Feeling the cold breeze on his "private," Damian snapped out of his sleep, only to find himself in the middle of a forest that was too... naked!

Thrown into an unfamiliar world with uneasiness and fear of the unknown, when Damian saw the horde of monsters, he wondered if he was supposed to fight them with his bare hands.

Just when he thought he was all alone... 

*Ding!*

«Installation of the system: 100%»

«Booting the 'Monster King' system»

He is destined to command armies, and he will do so, subduing every Moster.

Fighting and living among these monsters, he soon realises that monsters aren't the hateful demons of fantasies; in fact, they are the victims.

«A Spritual mine has been discovered!»

«Build your monster nation?»

Buildinga kingdom was Damian's unachievable fantasy, but now that he has the chance, he won't settle for a kingdom; he will build an empire!

His growth, however, is seen by others as the rise of a monster... 

The nature-protecting elves of the South;
the cunning humans of the West, for their watering mouths.
The money-loving drawfs of the underground, aren't holding back in the least;
Waiting for a war is the northern army of beasts;
far from the chaos are the mysterious observers of the east.
All eyes are on the Monster King, waiting for the right time to give his gold mine a feast. 

How would Damian fend off the hungry veltures in order to keep his promise of rising in this unheard-of culture?


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> Release schedule: 4 chapters/week
> 1 chapter every day except: Monday, Wednesday and Friday.

> The book is also available on Webnovel.

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So the story is quite good nothing in it pushes away the reader an I personally got invested early on so I didn't clicc away.

the style is simple but expressive, the author does a great job getting the point across while adding some atmosphere or descriptive observations.

I enjoy the story maybe cliche archetype but it's done in a refreshing an tasteful way. Not many chapters are out yet the ones that are have a good build up .

I didn't notice anything grammaticaly negative maybe a few run ons or words that could be used differently (or different ones used to explain what's needed) other than that it's top notch!

Id say the character is the most generic nothing that sticcs out or impressive yet, I do feel like the mc is more relatable an relaxed then lots of stories so I give this higher points than others.

 

Overall a fun story that I hope gets lot more attention an uploads :))

Idk how that wasn't 200 words but maybe a fun summary, basically the mc goes 2 new world naked an meets scary monsters then overwhelms one turning it into the most intellectual cutie the world has seen, oh ya an at some point got clothes so that's cool.