My Vampire Little Sister

My Vampire Little Sister

by Yunniye

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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

In a world where magic was abundant and supernatural creatures existed, Jin Valter lived as a fallen genius. Being the son of two A-Ranked Hunters, Jin had inherited his father’s keen eye for martial arts and his mother’s innate talent for magic. Alas, before Jin could reach his full potential, an Outer Demon attack left his soul crippled and his body weakened beyond repair.

Now, Jin lives out his days bound to the hospital bed with nothing but his brains to keep him company. Gone were the days when his peers hailed him as a genius as he struggled to even conjure a spell with his body falling apart.

However, it would all change when on the Night of the Blood Moon, a unique visitor paid him a visit…

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A little weird, a little vague, a little great

Reviewed at: Chapter 17: Vampire Aspect (2)

While the sister/brother references feel a little odd and crowbarred in, that seems somewhat due to the vagueness of much of our entrepid mc's condition, surroundings and slowly resolving amnesia. Overall I've really been enjoying the light novel style and light feel and looking forwards to where the story develops and evolves to in future