Soul of the Warrior

Soul of the Warrior

by Kyfe

In a world where Classes, Stats, and Levels are the everyday norm, Reivyn has a secret.

He was unusually aware of his surroundings from an incredibly early age, and Skills and Stats were acquired easily. He was just the son of an ordinary village family, and nothing appeared out of the ordinary on the surface. But below the surface, dreams of another life help shape his mentality and growth. Why does he have some remembrance of a past life, and what is his purpose in this new one?

"Soul of the Warrior" is what I call a Semi-Isekai LitRPG. I say "semi," because Reivyn's past life is remembered like a dream, and very incomplete. It is still Isekai, though, as he remembers enough that it directly shapes his personality and his sense of self.

The System that governs the world of "Soul of the Warrior" is a combination of modified versions from Selkie's "Beneath the Dragoneye Moons" and Kosnik4's "Magic Smithing." I have changed enough of these Systems and combined them in a way that is unique that I'm mostly sure it's fine, but I still have requested permission to use these ideas. They have both graciously granted me permission.

Winner of the April Writathon Challenge.

Release Schedule is Mon, Wed, Fri on Royal Road.

Cover Art by: Jay Graphixx ([email protected]). His work can be found on deviantart.com under JayGraphixx.

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93 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue - Dreams in the Void ago
Chapter 1 - Awakening ago
Chapter 2 - A Normal Family ago
Chapter 3 - Down with the System ago
Chapter 4 - Step by Step ago
Chapter 5 - A Swing and a Miss ago
Chapter 6 - Adventure! ago
Chapter 7 - The Struggle is Real ago
Chapter 8 - Classical Accident ago
Chapter 9 - Rabble Rabble ago
Chapter 10 - Regular Guy ago
Chapter 11 - Advancing ago
Chapter 12 - Hazy Assimilation ago
Chapter 13 - Sunny Day ago
Chapter 14 - Promising Prospects ago
Chapter 15 - We Don't Need Roads ago
Chapter 16 - Whistle While You Work ago
Chapter 17 - Home on the Range ago
Chapter 18 - Cooped Up ago
Chapter 19 - Turn and Meet ago
Chapter 20 - Aide and Attendance ago
Chapter 21 - Down into... ago
Chapter 22 - A Ring of Fire ago
Chapter 23 - Cult of Personality ago
Chapter 24 - Smooth Transition ago
Chapter 25 - Looking Forward ago
Chapter 26 - Table Manors ago
Chapter 27 - Ambition ago
Chapter 28 - Family History ago
Chapter 29 - On the Horizon ago
Chapter 30 - Movers and Shakers ago
Chapter 31 - Leavetaking ago
Chapter 32 - Arrival ago
Chapter 33 - Dungeon Town ago
Chapter 34 - Might and Magic ago
Chapter 35 - Magical Mashup ago
Chapter 36 - The Dark Damp ago
Chapter 37 - Hollow Escapade ago
Chapter 38 - The Dungerums ago
Chapter 39 - A Day in the Life ago
Chapter 40 - Coming to the Light ago
Chapter 41 - Interlude: Princess Amily and Brave Sir Fenrix ago
Chapter 42 - Classist ago
Chapter 43 - High Muckamuck ago
Chapter 44 - Desperation ago
Chapter 45 - Agony ago
Chapter 46 - Return ago
Chapter 47 - Lucky Draw ago
Chapter 48 - Too Easy ago
Chapter 49 - Solo Run Get! ago
Chapter 50 - Brave, Brave Sir Reivyn ago
Chapter 51 - He Bravely Turned His Tail and Fled ago
Chapter 52 - The Calm Before ago
Chapter 53 - The Storm ago
Chapter 54 - It's Darkest Before ago
Chapter 55 - The Dawn ago
Chapter 56 - After Action ago
Chapter 57 - Dance, Dance Revolution ago
Chapter 58 - The Party ago
Chapter 59 - Interlude: Princess Amily and Brave Sir Fenrix, Part 2 ago
Update: Cover Art Added ago
Chapter 60 - Tier 2, Too ago
Chapter 61 - Mama Bear ago
Chapter 62 - True Power ago
Chapter 63 - Meticulous Weaponry ago
Chapter 64 - Eternal Training ago
Chapter 65 - Unwanted Attention ago
Chapter 66 - Foot, Meet Mouth ago
Chapter 67 - Admission of Luck ago
Chapter 68 - New Beginning ago
Chapter 69 - Keep Your Hands to Yourself ago
Chapter 70 - Throw a Rope ago
Chapter 71 - Charismatic Instruction ago
Chapter 72 - Model Student ago
Chapter 73 - Rank and File ago
Chapter 74 - Royale Fight ago
Chapter 75 - Lurking Ruins ago
Chapter 76 - Cultural Affiliation? ago
Chapter 77 - Party in The Capital ago
Chapter 78 - Mixer ago
Chapter 79 - Boss Dungeon ago
Chapter 80 - Scuffle ago
Chapter 81 - Tour de Fort ago
Chapter 82 - Bossy Mage ago
Chapter 83 - Rematch ago
Chapter 84 - Dishonorable ago
Chapter 85 - Collateral Damage ago
Chapter 86 - Flickering Inspiration ago
Chapter 87 - Worldly Wisdom ago
Chapter 88 - Diametric Expectations ago
Chapter 89 - Advance Effort ago
Chapter 90 - Triple Threat ago
Chapter 91 - Dark Relation ago

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maledei
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There are some good elements, but just not written in the most compelling way. The author has a tendency to infodump everything in excessive monologues which are just a chore to get through. I started skipping those a lot. (I recommend to skip chapter 3 completely, you won't miss anything really)

The semi-isekai 'soul' is not really relevant at all aside from the beginning, it is never brought up again after the first few chapters. I don't think that there is any point to it.

Another problem is the completely milktoast character of the MC. I don't remember one single emotion from him in the whole story so far. Things just happen to him and he reacts. Getting drafted? Well let's march. Getting beaten to an inch of your life? Cool I leveld up. Let's recuperate and forget that it happened. Getting attacked by an assassin? Oh I leveled up.

The MC is just completely detached.

Sidecharacters are just vessels of exposition, they don't feel real or fleshed out. A friend who's drafted along with him is a bit of a comic relief character but doesn't really interact with the MC a lot.  A bully who has it out for the MC for no reason is quickly dispatched in the story, the officers are there to give orders and occasionally kill strong monsters and can't be described as anything other than strong and stern.

My advice would be to spend less on game mechanics, and more on who your characters are, what motivates them. What do they strive to, what is the conflict, what or who does the MC need to overcome?

 

luda305
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This is a fairly well written work, if perhaps a bit niche.

The basic premise of the story is a semi-reincarnation at birth into a LitRPG world with a system. The protagonist's early awareness and maturity means he's on track for being rather over-powered, though already we're shown that the scale of power in the world is rather tall (not quite xianxia levels). 

The plot itself appears to be a military fantasy story, something which also emphasizes a number of themes that show up. There's a lot of training with various weapons, and eventually the protagonist ends up

conscripted into the military.  

He spends a lot of internal monologue (actually, it might technically be narrative now that I think about it) observing how a military works in this world specifically and under this particular System. 

The System is definitely on the crunchy end of things, for better or for worse. 

The writing style is fairly straightforward and easy to read, with just that tinge of something common to a lot of military fiction. (...I actually can't be more specific than that.  If you've read more than like 3 military fiction stories, you know what I mean). 

The grammar is very good. 

The characters are fairly well written.  The protagonist and his parents are rather well formed personalities, as are a few of the military servicemen that he interacts with significantly. The younger twin sisters seem a little flat, and the "childhood friends" that the protagonist has aren't terrible well-formed either, given that they appear rather abruptly, have like 2-3 chapters of adventures, and then the protagonist ends up leaving town. (The caveat there is that he's with one of the friends, but it's a little fuzzy on that point because they're near each other for now, but it's clear that the literally and figurative distance between them is growing). 

DrBeevs
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I'm not exactly sure why, but I find myself looking forward to new chapters of this book more than most others I follow. I like the magic system. The protagonist is somewhat OP, but mostly due to his intelligence, hard work, lineage, and living in a low power region. The author gives good reasons for most of the events. 

kelkel1133
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How did it get so many 5 stars??

Reviewed at: Chapter 4 - Step by Step

First, a disclaimer: I have never read the entirety of the story and had never caught up to the latest chapter due to one simple reason

How the heck the mother came up with the idea of infodumping an entire in-universe's laws on the system on a less than a year old child? It simply beggared disbelief that not only were they accepting the absurdity that a child has the mental capacity to understand all that. They didn't even react so strongly about the fact that a child has so many skills, not even entertaining the thought that the child must've counted wrong, or even understand the entire concept of counting in the first place. To anyone out there who actually had the experience of teaching a toddler, the mental gymnastics one has to do in order correlate a finger to a singular inclusive existence, and to do that over 10 times is simply impossible to a dozen month old child, even with the assistance of stats.

I feel like there could be more, the father's Rare class for example, and the mother's seemingly out of the blue savviness when it comes to the system and the weird segueing in getting random skills, but I haven't read the future chapters so I'm reserving judgement

TheAbyssStaresBack
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There is a lot of info dumping about the system. I mean, paragraph after paragraph where a character just monologues about the system. It seems like the author wanted readers to understand all of the system immediately. Anyone that knows children would understand that even if the main character is the most intelligent eight month old, he would not understand or sit still long enough for his mother's lecture. 

Additionally, many sentences are repetitive or awkward. For example, here is a paragraph from chapter 4:

"Got you!" His father popped his head out on the other side of the armoire. He had lost focus on the game he was playing while he was thinking about what he had learned. He shrieked in delight while he reflexively jumped from being startled.

 

Kyrian Clawraithe
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When you ignore almost every piece of dialogue in this story, it's quite an entertaining read. The author is skilled in describing scenes and the system seems well made.

Unfortunately, it's still pretty much unreadable because the author doesn't know how to write dialogue either in conversation or thoughts. It's mainly info dumps, with no regard for the personalities or capabilities of the characters involved or the situation that they're in. The parents literally give an in depth lecture about the System and different parts to live with the System right after the MC has unlocked the first level of the language that they're speaking.

I don't know if it'll get better in later chapters because with the way that the dialogue is written, there's no way for me to be able to reach that point in the story. I'd love to read this story if it's fixed, but until then I'll just have to wait.

armyofsheep
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Excellent military story (so far)

Reviewed at: Chapter 26 - Table Manors

This is my new favorite story and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Things I like:

- I like how the MC and his family interacts with each other. In this genre, the MC often has a strained or traumatic family experience, but here the family is supportive and loving. It is refreshing to see a MC that has an optimistic view, and it is clear that the bedrock for that view comes from his family 

and the snippets of his past life that we are shown.

 

- I love the descriptions of the military. It is clear that the author served in the military. His descriptions of military training, marching, chain of command, and the MC's observations of how orders are given, commander's intent, and interactions with military officers, are so realistic. I loved that the military units are described as competent, the commanders actually care about their troops, and the little details of the soldiers being assigned duties, from cleaning latrines to cooking, to patrol. These realistic descriptions and the favorable view make these chapter a joy to read.  I like how this story doesn't fall into the tropes of the military being corrupt or nefarious. I like how th MC is part of a team instead being a lone adventurer or in a small party. 

There are hints that he will go do the solo adventurer thing, but I kind of hope he stays in the military and rises through the ranks. 

- The characters:  The characters are flushed out individuals. It is clear that the author has really thought about what each character's motivations are. These are not just shells, but fully fleshed out individuals. 



Things that could be improved: These couple of things are why I didn't give the full 5 stars, and for me they are not deal beakers, it is clear that the author was writing during the writathon and I think he'll fix these issues I further revisions. 

- The first couple of chapters were a little wierd. The author uses grandiose language that doesn't really fit his style. 

Once the MC is born and is interacting with the real world instead of the void, the simple straightforward style settles in and is very easy to read.

 

- Sometimes it seems the MC (and maybe the author) overlooks some simple things that are obvious. For example, when working as the Aide to the Knight Lieutenant, why doesn't the MC think about writing home to tell his parents how things are going? It seemed strange that for such a young boy he never really thinks about missing his parents or being concerned about them know that he's ok. This could be explained in a line or two, maybe there is no post that are carrying messages out of camp, maybe he can't afford it, maybe he has reasons he doesn't want to, but it seems strange that it doesn't cross his mind.

 

Overall, this is a solid story and an absolute joy to read. The plot is interesting, the characters are awesome, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

 

DeathlyOreo
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If you've been on this site for longer than a few minutes, you've read a story very similar to this one. MC is born into a magical litrpg world, and uses adult brain/past experience to become OP. 

You may think to yourself...why are there so many of these? No matter how many I've read, there always seems to be another one.

Well...you can blame this author for that. Cause no matter how many times I've read a story with an almost identical premise, there always seems to be another one that's better than the last. This is that latest amazing story.

Nothing particularly new compared to others in the same genre, at least not so far. But that's fine, because it's amazing as it is.

Main character is strong without being ridiculously OP, characters are empathetic and logical, and the system is well thought out. There are a few grammar mistakes in each chapter ('to' instead of 'too', etc.), but nothing major, and the chapters are being pumped out amazingly fast, so it's easily forgivable.

 

Only minor pet peeve (not really an issue, but just as feedback for the author...) is that the author makes the world use a different calendar with longer years than the one in our world. Which is fine...but I have trouble identifying anyone's ages. The MC is currently 10, but is early teens(?) in earth years. He meets someone who's a teenager...does that mean 16 in earth years or 16 in this world's years(~20)? I haven't done all the math, but I have a hard time really picturing everyone's respective ages because of this.

Shadowkitty
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Straightforward, Engaging, and strikingly familiar

Reviewed at: Chapter 20 - Aide and Attendance

As a military man myself, there is a lot of this story that feels like I'M the one experiencing the flashbacks.  Much of the verbage used, different phrases and terms, are distinctly military and feel right at home.  I've always been a fan of these slightly niche stories written by fellow service members, because of this particular feel that they tend to carry. 

Beyond this, I imagine even civilian readers will find the story engaging.  The plot is very 'meat and potatoes', carrying itself forward with purpose and not spending much time dallying around.  Blue boxes are a favourite around RR, as well, and for those who's brain makes the chemical when watching numbers get bigger; this story will meet that demand to some degree. It isn't insanely stat box heavy, but the author makes an effort to give readers access to the various tidbits of world information and sometimes goes as far as to add extra info in the after-chapter notes for things like stat comparisons or what other Class/Profession data might look like.

The main character is a little bit bland at times, but he's young and without the typical 'isekai' advantage of fully remembering his past.  There's plenty of room for him to become a solid protagonist as he gains experience and moves forward, capitalizing on the various advantages he's been provided.  The supporting characters feel appropriately so, a functioning ensemble of militant professionals doing what military professionals do-- Complaining, standing by to stand by, and getting **** done.

todd
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I started this story because the few reviews were gushing about it and honestly didn't expect much from it. That said, the story rolls from a steady litrpg progression to a Romanesque military fantasy adventure so smoothly I didn't realize how wrapped up I was until the next button stopped working. The protagonist starts with clear advantages, however, the power climb is slow enough that improvement is still visible and noticeable, without the MC immediately stumbling into Unlimited Power. The system is well thought out, but the focus remains on personal development and skill growth instead of just Skill growth. In short, an easy recommendation for adventure fantasy.

Style: Smooth and steady. Scenes and action are clearly described without drowning in excessive words and there's a smooth cadence to how events flow from paragraph to paragraph. Easy reading.

Grammar: Almost perfect, with occasional errors. Levies is written as levis for a few chapters, but otherwise, there's only the rare misspelled word.

Story: Honestly, I've read so many isekai fantasies at this point that it feels like I should be tired of the genre. That said, this sort of story is why I always come back. The world is a neatly fleshed-out medieval era with a solid System and a (so far) well thought out civilization. Outside of cities and villages, monsters and intelligent beasts roam wild and are the purview of local armies to put down en route to whatever mission is assigned. Conflicts within humanity (or at least within the kingdom) put significant effort into ensuring minimal casualties, presumably because every soul is needed. The military writing is great, with an actual understanding of the command chain, rank interactions, and the boring mundanity that serves to highlight the moments of action. Given that the author seems to have an actual military background, I look forward to a story where the MC doesn't openly challenge the ranking brass and win everyone's respect because they're a main character. Overall, the fusion of progression, solid military writing, and expanding world make for an extremely satisfying blend that I look forward to seeing more of.

Characters: It took me a bit when writing this to consider whether the characters were problematic. They aren't, but I think it's worth noting that character moments are rarely highlighted. There's a sense of motion to everything and rather than spend time clearly spelling out who individuals are behind their description, they are revealed obliquely by actions that receive no more focus than any other moment. It's a victory of showing over telling and makes the characters feel a great deal more natural. Even the protagonist himself is broadly fleshed out through his actions, rather than sinking into internal monologues to clarify his position on everything that happens. That said, it's done so naturally that the mechanism by which characters are handled didn't even occur to me until sitting down and writing this.

Overall, barring any significant divergence from the current quality, I expect this story do incredibly well on Royal Road. It's a solid fantasy adventure with great action, realistic characters, and a clear respect for the world they're writing in.