MECHROMANCER: A Robot Necromancer LitRPG

MECHROMANCER: A Robot Necromancer LitRPG

by spellbastard
Co-Author: Zach Skye

Warning This fiction contains:
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\\AI615 BEGINNING REPORT \\CONTACT MADE WITH LOCAL CIVILIZATION POSSESSING TECHNOLOGY OUTSIDE OF KNOWN UNDERSTANDING

\\PLANETARY LOCALS CLAIMED TO POSSESS LEVELS AND QUANTIFIABLE STATISTICS

\\ON INITIAL EXAMINATION, LOCAL ADVANCEMENT APPEARED TO MATCH A LATE IRON AGE TECHNOLOGICAL LEVEL \\RECONNAISSANCE SCANNING AND INTELLIGENCE GATHERING REPORTED ANOMALOUS BEHAVIOR

\\2.61 SECONDS AGO, LOCAL SAPIENTS INITIATED COMBAT WITH AI615, AI616 AND GROUND CREW

\\AI615 REQUESTING IMMEDIATE—

Error. End of message not received.

Mechanical Officer 1, designation OFF01, was terminated. The colonization mission failed.
OFF01 has been brought back to life through the magic of the system, and it’s directives have been overwritten. Now OFF01 has a new directive: protect one Tobias Agrippa at any cost.

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I can't wait to see how this story evolves.  

The main character is quite distinctive - being a robot - and the possibilities of how it interacts both with the System and the people have a great deal of potential.

It is interesting that there are both (high) tech and magic aspects to consider.

DarkSpagles
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the writing is solid and flows nicely to read, the A.I is interesting and makes sense, i can see this story going to the top of rising quite soon if it keeps uploading! give it a read if you want i can see this going into my "main" stories i read instead of the filler ones i read out of desperation.

Mittssss
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A pretty good story can't wait for more to sink my teeth into! While I dont have a lot to say or pass judgement on. This story has a pretty engrossing introduction that will leave you wanting more. It's premise is already something Im sure id be into, so please if you like litrpg give it a shot.

danlin
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Nearly 200 years have passed since a high tech automated colonization ship touched down on a system fantasy world and was annailiated by the magic-using locals who thought they were demons. Now, a ruthless necromancer lucks into reviving one of the humanoid robots as a skelington with the directive to protect him. Follow OFF01's quest to protect Tobias the necromancer from all threats, from the church's Templars to even Tobias himself.

Very good. I highly reccomend. My main hope is that Tobias becomes super powerful. He is basically the MC in my point of view.

Unordanarlyunsolved
Overall

ive always wanted a machine or AI as the Mc of a story but for some reason this is the one ive found all the others rely on another organic being that tries to teach the robot morals but if i wanted a moral charector that acted like an organic being then i would just read a story not about the AI i really love ruthless and selfish MCs perferably without romance and this has all of that overall i just really love it

Joelseph14
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Pretty nice premis, I'm enjoying the terrifying inevitability of a badly shackled robot following the direct lettering on an incompetent order. The writing is very good and while you need to suspend your disbelief for some of the choices the characters make I don't think it's a problem. All in all I'm enjoying it and the quality is enough for me to give 5 stars though that's pretty cheap coming from me.

lelendor
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Current Chapter at time of Review: 23

Extremely good so far. It is well written with solid litRPG mechanics. I currently love the way the MC "interprets" the commands given.

Main thing that might deter people, the MC will not become more human as stated by the author. This will not be a humanization story

Worth reading

9two436
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Amazing book, love the ai protag

Reviewed at: Chapter 22: Where is Tobias

Honestly, this book is amazing. I love it so much. And, so do many others. Stop reading reviews and read it already. 

 

 

 

 

But anyway... this is an amazing book. The AI protaganist is amazing because he thinks like an AI. It makes sense, and is done well. I honestly cannot say anything else. Uhhhh this needs to be 50 words.... I don't know what to say... this is an amazing book yadda yadda yadda LOVE IT SO MUCHHHH. We need more robot mcs. Love the necromancy. There that should be good...

kurokuma
Overall

Undead Robots....hey it works

Reviewed at: Chapter 18: Offo Must Die

Have you ever wondered if it was possible to raise robots as undead?

If you have this is the story for you.

Add in a class up system and you have a recipe for all kinds of fun filled exp farming.... oh so much exp farming.

Though I'm waiting for it to go Skynet on it's "master.

Great story tyelling very imaginative, good grammer and spelling.

Worth reading.

Uninventive alias
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Interesting setting, interesting approach, good a,

Reviewed at: Chapter 17: Bad news

Pretty damn enjoyable story to read. No real errors I can see in grammar or spelling. Author is good at telling the story and the setting is interesting. Not sure what else I can say but give it a read if it's something your even vaguely interested in. I. Just writing to get to 50 words now as apparently need to to post a review