Matsumoto Kunio was just an average human living a boring life in Tokyo, Japan. That was the case until he died and was reincarnated to another world! Armed with a System and tasked with a mission to save the world, watch as Matou, the new name he was given, sets off on an epic adventure!
…Or at least, that should have happened?
“All right, hand me the thingamabob, you’re no longer the main character! Now, how does this thing work? Ah.
“My name is Kayden, and witness my ascendance to the God of Thieves! None shall be safe from my hands, not even your beloved System! Muahahahaha!”
This can’t be happening…
Hi, this novel is a LitRPG novel. In case you are confused, both Kayden and Matou are main characters, but the ‘protagonist’ would be Kayden. The novel is pretty slow-paced (in my opinion), so do keep that in mind when reading.
This is my first novel, so do leave reviews and comments on how to improve my writing. Be nice about it.
Also, I recently added the profanity tag. There is some swearing but it's not excessive or anything. Adding it just in case.
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The way they talk just struck a nerve with me. Not sure why. Most parts of the conversations actually seem rather well put. But then those few rare parts have to drag the entire thing down with them, becoming a black hole of focus with the pure babbling. There's only so much stammering and fancy talk that one can bear before it becomes too much. This fiction has taught me what It feels like to go beyond that limit.
Other parts are fine, though. Setting isn't that original but who needs that? Great world for great stories. Just needs some work done on it and it'll be good to go.