Trinity Online: The Farside Chronicles

Trinity Online: The Farside Chronicles

by jddickinson

Andaros Terasien was a badly misunderstood young man who lived quietly with his single mother on the planet Meracene, that is until the day his world came crashing down around him. Convicted for a crime he didn't commit, and bereft of the only pillar of support he ever had, he is shipped off to a prison planet. Living in this new world, can he find the strength to carry on? When he is given a second chance and selected to take part in an experimental new reform system, will he be able to make things work? Can he carry on when he learns that this new lease on life is no more forgiving than his original life?

Join our hero as he begins his adventure within the galaxy's greatest Virtual Reality Roleplaying Game and attempts to change his fate.

Note: This is a rewrite of Trinity Online which was posted over on Japtem. The setting is very different, but many of the character names are reused. The title has been labelled as Mature as many of the pitfalls of real life, and the depravity thereof are still present.
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deadking227
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Love the story. I would defanitly read the rest.

xtremeloldude
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i just want to say that regardless of where you go with this story from here (currently volume 1 chapter 1 when i'm writing this) i feel like you've earned this rating simply for chapter 1 of the prologue. That song and his memories of his mother really managed to shape the mc.

quicksilv
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So happy I found you here

I read the original story at japtem and was hooked on every line you wrote. So I’m happy to see you writtimg again. @the announcement chapter you made on 5/6/16 do whatever you want I’m sure whatever you write will be at the quality you normally write at (personally I have enjoyed what you written so far and think you should continue as is). My only real request is you keep writing and keep us posted on when your gonna release new chapters.

ashurh
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Not Really My Cup O' Tea

This is a decent story, great even, but imo it's not nearly as good as the first one, it's too bad you gave up on it.

Lectival Sol
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Like were its going, not really a review

Liked the other one better, but I think it has promise keep up the good work.

SileNeshoba
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I still like the original story. But I will read this one.