Join our hero as he begins his adventure within the galaxy's greatest Virtual Reality Roleplaying Game and attempts to change his fate.
Note: This is a rewrite of Trinity Online which was posted over on Japtem. The setting is very different, but many of the character names are reused. The title has been labelled as Mature as many of the pitfalls of real life, and the depravity thereof are still present.
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Love the story. I would defanitly read the rest.
i just want to say that regardless of where you go with this story from here (currently volume 1 chapter 1 when i'm writing this) i feel like you've earned this rating simply for chapter 1 of the prologue. That song and his memories of his mother really managed to shape the mc.
I read the original story at japtem and was hooked on every line you wrote. So I’m happy to see you writtimg again. @the announcement chapter you made on 5/6/16 do whatever you want I’m sure whatever you write will be at the quality you normally write at (personally I have enjoyed what you written so far and think you should continue as is). My only real request is you keep writing and keep us posted on when your gonna release new chapters.
This is a decent story, great even, but imo it's not nearly as good as the first one, it's too bad you gave up on it.
Liked the other one better, but I think it has promise keep up the good work.
I still like the original story. But I will read this one.