H*llmark: But Murder and Aliens

H*llmark: But Murder and Aliens

by Commander Kane

After a bustling big city lawyer has a fateful encounter with a body-snatching alien, her new co-pilot steers her back to her home town. The rekindling of an old friendship with the struggling neighborhood painter leaves the foreign mind confused--and smitten. But all's not well in the city she left behind; a string of bodies takes a brilliant detective on something of a goose chase leading right to the lovesick pair.

Can romance blossom in this classic tale of murder and aliens?

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Commander Kane

Commander Kane

[Founding Member of the Zard Skwad]

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Chaos Jester
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Will definitely update this as the story goes, but I am absolutely hyped for this.

Nothing like the eye rolling Hallmark movie pattern getting completely flipped on its head with the addition of aliens and murder.

Definitely in this for the long haul and can't wait to see where it goes