Wandering Soul

Wandering Soul

by Madkitty32

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My name is Monica delrose, and I am human...or I was human. Actually, it would probably be better to start from the beginning. See I was born on earth, attended a high school before I was summoned by a God. instead of being granted some awesome powers and skills, like I expected, I was cast aside, told I was useless. The next thing I know I am in a dungeon, now I have to possess a goblin and survive in this harsh environment. There are a lot of dangers lurking down here like the dungeons own traps and adventurers looking to kill anything and everything but none are as dangerous to me as the dungeons own monsters. The deeper I go the more dangerous it becomes at least along the way I can grab some sweet XP, skills and evolve into something stronger. Oh and of course do some serious looting!

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SomberWraith
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Great story, and I love the authors style!

Reviewed at: 1. The Goblin

Love the story, and the characters, the writing could use some polishing, and there are some minor mistakes, but not enough to stop me from reading it. I was hooked from the first few words, and I know this is gonna keep me up late at night, because of how captivating it is.and I love the  main characters personality. Keep up the good work author! I can't wait to see where it goes.

jasonofwolves
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So far so good. I like the main character so far. Them not being in their own body and possessing a goblin is interesting so far. My biggest complaint is the update speed, as it is a pretty long time between chapters. The system seems to have a bit of snark, which is always nice. Pulls you in well enough, and it isn't aimless where Mc has nothing to do and just goes around doing whatever, which is always a plus. Enjoying it so far. Not too much to say right now since there are only a few chapters out, and I might update later when it has more meat to it. Now i am just trying to fill in the words needed, and for some reason it ain'ts showing me how many words I have used. Much sadness. Much time is being spent trying to make snetences happen. Much dissapointment with not knowing how many words are left to say.