Blessed by the Luck Goddess

Blessed by the Luck Goddess

by kakashi774

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content

By a series of misfortunes, Daniel Creed ends up stumbling into another realm. 

A realm where the concept of beauty for women is completely flipped.

Now Daniel will try to make the most in this new world of possibilities with an unexpected help of a mischievous goddess.

Warning:

There is a Trap in the Harem :O

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I really can't read any further

Reviewed at: Chapter 9 - Watersports

It's awful. I don't want to be mean but oh God this is bad. I don't even know how to explain it. 

 

It does have typos, not a lot but that's not the issue it's the absurdity and raw awfulness of the story. I can't in good conscious recommend anyone pick up this story because the main point of the story is what makes it so awful. I'm not being mean. It's just a fact. The author needs to seriously consider completely overhauling the story and maybe look up what not to do when writing a story.