An anthology and companion piece of The Perfect Run, covering the question you've all asked once... what if?  

What if Quicksave had become a Psycho? What if Len Sabino had taken the Violet Elixir rather than the Blue? What if Jasmine had remembered? What if Ryan had gained a different power or fallen in love with someone else? Follow the Ultimate One as it guides you through these roads not taken. 

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Maxime J. Durand (Void Herald)

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Atomicallyours
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Perfect run was absolutely perfect! This lovely addition makes it even better, feeding my addiction to our time-stopping hero.

This fills the Void left in my heart for it as it was ended.

Also, I did all of the cover art for this series, of which I am proud. 

 

Wreaver
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Alright this is the good stuff here ladies and gentlemen. If you liked The Perfect Run and are sad to see it done then this is right for you if you wanted more of it, but just know that these are stand alone one shots, much like Mother of learning' au chapters and marvel's what if's. 

Entitled Infracaninophile
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Hey!!! I can't believe how lucky I am!! We all are! This is funtastic. Alright, I just read the first chapter, and, I'm already convinced! It's, as expected, over the top, one of the best, superior, the original fanfic, grimdark, harsh, but unfortunately plausible. And, and, Shorty was saved! Well, kind of, but, but, still. And Ryan, he's so much more OP, but with a tragic twist, at least in the first chapter.

I can only highly recommended! Goash! This story was totally unexpected, and it's a joy!! Enjoy it too (of course after reading the original The Perfect Run story by the author - here or on Kindle).

Silver tail
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You know you're going to love it. This is such a great idea and work amazing for a time loop with so many moving parts!!!

I can't wait for more of these. So many different way things can go, literally endless.

Thank you so much for making this. Or maybe it was just to get people to stop bugging you 🤔. Hope everyone has fun. I will redo this when their is more of course 

GreenPhoenix
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Great work as always. I am a little surprised by what created the combo, but am quite happy with how it turned out. Looking forward to more of your work!

I imagine most of the future chapters are going to get rather dark. Futures where Ryan decides to trust no one and stay secluded among others.

Cadmus
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A "What If" that was done quite well. Short and sweet (not really), to the point and basically spoiler free if you haven't read the main book or finished it yet 

 

It keeps Ryan's personality, his usual demeanor but it adds the whole Psycho twist (I've read up to chapter 56 of Perfect Run atm so I can't elaborate on if Ryan gets dark dark).

And of course it answers some fans burning questions of what would happen had Ryan done this or that. Hope we get more content like this soon!

 

Cheers, and thanks for all your excellent works :)

SnazTheDino
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I love that this kind of chapter exists but we need more what ifs 

 

 

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rekreator12e
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I loved the original but I always though that it would be more interesting if Ryan did some things differently and this side story came to my rescue. It's a shame that the format is single chapter stories and not longer tellings of The Ultimate One. Anyway I hope Mr. Void herald will write more

MK bk-201
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For anyone who has read the main story i strongly recommend for you to read this, here we see how different possibilities would turn out, for now we only have 2: if Ryan had become a Psycho by taking another elixir and he and Len would have taken each other elixir, both are great, the worst ending and a happy but not perfect ending, im hoping to see a couple more before the author end this.