The Prototype

The Prototype

by retrobolic

A story of a man who, through good intentions and unlucky circumstances, becomes the most wanted man on the planet. Hired to a powerful tech company with no background in the field, Nathaniel Hensley has to discover the mysteries that surround him if he has any chance of making it out alive.

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