The Blue Mage Raised by Dragons

by Virlyce

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Magic Multiple Lead Characters Strong Lead

Blue mages learn skills from beasts. This is the story of one fortunate enough to be taken in by dragons.

Book 1 and Book 2 available on Amazon!

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Please note that this is the original, unpublished, web-novel version.

Check out my website: http://www.virlyce.com/

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Aternus
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Good Light-hearted fun with some nice romance and seriousness mixed in.

Whole story is just fantastic and the style and grammar match it.

You can get what you came for, a nice slice of life fantasy with romance, with the occasional serious plotline, and a final fantasy inspiration. And in that category it is perfection. The romance feels real, the characters are enjoyable and we finally after sooooo long get an OP MC who is realistic in using his powers. No trite plot stories to nerf him or somehow restrict his power, he is who he is and it is oh so much fun reading along. 

I'm writing this as I just re-read the story for a second time and it'd  be silly not to share my love for this story after such a thing. 

Gamerkitt3nz
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Interesting but not everyone's cup of tea. The small parts build into something alright. I enjoyed it for a time because I was looking for lighthearted op mc type stuff, but looking back it's not all that great. The biggest issue I think, is pacing.

 

 

 

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I have nothing else to say and have to hit 200 word limit. The reason that I don't just do a simple review is to show people what to expect.

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orsi
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Already starts over the top but then suffers from Flanderization

Reviewed at: Book 2 Chapter 53

Mild Spoilers in this review for book 1.

Mc is a human child raised by dragons. He soon starts to encounter other civilizations and a lot of the early jokes are based on him misbehaving. Which is fine, and done well. But then it doesn't ever progress from there, it just doubles down on it, over and over again, same jokes, same "issues", same reactions, after 1.5 books all that happened is that from a human child thinking he is a dragon Mc became and Adult that is thinking he is a dragon. Although there are whole story arcs early about him learning to behave and learning the customs the character itself doesn't progress and that gets frustrating.

 

I think the author wanted to go for an Mc that is essentially the stereotypical barbarian in a group, strong, stubborn and brash but what they ended up with is an Mc that is just plain dumb (although he ate half a "tree of knowledge" and read a whole royal library before he was 6) and later on this destroys the whole reading experience.


Sadly, even with all the potential the story had I can't recommend this.

jburge1
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Lost interest after a while

I lost interest after a while (about ch. 44).  It was cute and fun for a bit, but it never really felt like a cohesive story.  The world building was shallow, the character development was shallow, the author seemed more concerned with getting a laugh than telling a good story.  Also, just because you have an OP character doesn't mean there can't be challenges.  Everything was just too easy, which made the plot bland.

theunseenone
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The high ratings are misleading.

Spoilers below.

 

From the reviews, I expected a lot more than I got. The series has the barebones of what could be a good story, but it just falls entirely short in pretty much all aspects. The story varies from breakneck pace to a plodding crawl where a whole lot of nothing goes on. All of the characters are one or two dimensional, with the only characters with some depth being Grimmy and Lindyss despite being side characters. Even worse, characters come and go and you feel nothing with their deaths or absence because they had so little impact on you to begin with, i.e. the suddenly evil Demon King (with no foreshadowing of his evil) dying. The romance is as unbelievable as it is flimsy, especially after the decades long time skip that left Vur at the mental age of six which no one seems to mind.

 

I could go on and on, but I was just really disappointed by this series and finally had to drop it at chapter 80. If the author rewrote the whole thing and fleshed out all the good bones of a story and character they had set up then it could be a truly great read, but as it is it's really anemic. There are better things to spend your time on.

victorfw
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reads like a teenagers scribble

I didn't have the courage to start book 3.

Book 1 was a complete mess plot-wise... story went nowhere, 'arcs' (and I use the term loosely) started and ended without as much as a paragraph of exploring. Chapters' worth of foreshadowing often went down the drain with three phrases and a couple of watered down jokes.

Book 2 held it together a bit better, but suffered from the same lack of climax: chapters of foreshadowing and amped up 'tension'... and it's over with "my intuition tells me I should just do this". Come on, really?

I loved the premise of a blue mage and the whole dragons shenanigan, but it is never even explored and is just there as a convenient excuse.

Thoroughly disappointed, won't pick it up again.

Chasme
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Fun but over the edge insanity.

This is first time I'm writing review. I finished reading demon's journey from this author. His novel have op characters lacking common sense. They are fun and stupid both. But in chapter 98 is finally over the edge.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 Those who gave 5 star have something wrong with their preference.

G4merSylver
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Personal Opinion

This story will reach the top-weekly or even top-monthly, it's just a question of time. On another note… Chapters are kinda short, but have an daily release. Maybe you would consider a longer chapter a day?

Style

Its written well, you know how to use paragraphs and you know your vocabulary. The sentences are about the right length, as are the paragraphs. However there is a lack of things that would help to visualize. How does the vampire look? The adventurers? The pooping dragon? everything I know about the MC are his dragonic eyes and that he probably is a 4Y/O midget?

Story

Its relatively unique, to this point (ch15). BTW blue mages aren't limited to FF. Please don't rush the story, also don't crawl through it.

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Character

If anything is to bitch about it's the lack of visualization, I know their personalities but I have mostly no friggin idea how they look. Don't you dare to use images! On another note, be careful of how "deep" you make your characters, randomly creating deep characters just to never see them again… Nit a good idea. Also be careful about how and how many you introduce characters.

amassie
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It would be nice if the main character struggled at some point instead of breasing through everything. Very well written though, and there is a noticable difference in the writing quality from start to end.

omnerabdator
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No idea why theres a Tragedy Tag..

like the title says, why is there a Tragedy tag when this is pure comedy? 30 chapters in and nothing but silliness sure the dragons burned down a few towns but it was treated lightly.

 

Apart from that, most of the characters are great, i get annoyed by the MC since he makes no progress, his still a brat.

 

FINAL WORD

Characters are great, Story is..huh was there a story?, Comedy is fairly decent