The Journey to find the New Golden Emperor (V5 Complete)
by TLCsDestiny
As someone is transmigrated, you learn most of the world through their eyes and who maybe close to her.
Sahara has lived and died once before, making her adapting nature look strange and unfitting. In this new world she is a father’s daughter and adopted grandchild to the same man…Go ahead and laugh, she did…
Sahara doesn’t want to put up with nonsense, like getting picked on just because she is smarter than the average person her ‘age’…I mean, she did transmigrate, so of course she’s smarter than what her body’s age should be!
Nonetheless, this world is a dog-eat-dog world, a world where only the strong survives, and so, there are times when a darkness inside of her is used to keep herself and her loved ones safe…
Over a century ago, there was a Golden Emperor, and a golden bridge that connected all the Haven’s together…Now there is no Golden Emperor and there is no Golden Haven…
To become the one and only Golden Emperor though, one must get the trust of all the Haven’s to accomplish that feat once again…
And so, we continue this journey as the strange occurrence of transmigration has happened…Which only leads to a fate that had started long ago…
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Reviewed at: CHAPTER 83 **Calm before the Storm…**
A bit of a slow start, I started to get really interested around chapter 7. Occasional breaking of the fourth wall. It's well written in terms of sentence structure, spelling grammar, etc but sometimes a little too verbose. I really like the story and plot though I'm not sure how close I feel to the main character... she's hard to connect with a little at times but then really relatable at others. I rally like some of the side characters like Matthew and Talon. Definitely worth a try and I look forward to seeing where the story goes next.
A difficult read, but interesting.
Reviewed at: CHAPTER 23 **Braving the Wilderness**
It's difficult to read. Some of the words aren't used properly, the syntax is odd and the occasional missing comma, make some sentences unreadable. Machine translation maybe?
Anyway, the story is interesting. The MC gets reincarnated into another world, but she doesn't behave according to her age. Despite losing a few decades, she still behaves as the mature woman of her past life.
Some of the problems I've found that were difficult to swallow were
the first year of life as a baby living solo, then later on the adult prince and his fascination with her as a preteen girl.
They could easily be fixed, by making her a toddler, starting from the age of 3, not just a few months after birth.
While the prince thing, simply adjust her age to 14-15, and his to 18 or something similar. Closer to Romeo & Juliette, but still more palatable.
Tl;dr. It's difficult to read from technique reasons, but the creativity and novel point of view makes up for it.